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Array ( [sid] => 36500 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Look Inside My World [time] => 2004-02-26 20:58:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Everything that has happened to me i feel is my fault
All i can do is get on my knees and pray
Pray that i can fix all that i have destroyed.
How can i do this is the only question that still remains
How do i change who i have always been
How can i change what i have become

Look inside my world
Tell me what you see
Can you see my anger flare
Can you peer at my being

Look into my life
Can you feel my pain
Do you now understand
Why I am who I am

No one can be at fault everytime they are accused
No one can be molded into something that they do not want to be
So why would you ask me to change for you
Are you that important in my life that I would truly want to please you
How can you act so confidently that I am your slave
How do you make me wish I was your slave

Look inside my world
Tell me what you see
Is it dark there
Why can I not see

Look into this life
Can you feel what I feel
This pain is called love
This pain is to real

Every time I look back on what I have done in the past
I feel as though I am indebted to you
Some how you brought me out of this prison cell
The cell that had self contained me all to well
How did you manage to break into my world
How did you accomplish what I by myself never could

Look inside my world
Tell me what you see
I am seeing an Angel
An Angel telling me what to be

Look into my life
Can you feel this joy
The feeling of pleasure
A feeling new to me

Look inside my world
Tell me what you see
Can you see your self
Cause that's all I see

You make up this world
You make this world life
You are the only existing Angel
You are the key to my life [comments] => 4 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 2 [informant] => poet_of_anger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Look Inside My World

Contributed by poet_of_anger on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:58:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Everything that has happened to me i feel is my fault
All i can do is get on my knees and pray
Pray that i can fix all that i have destroyed.
How can i do this is the only question that still remains
How do i change who i have always been
How can i change what i have become

Look inside my world
Tell me what you see
Can you see my anger flare
Can you peer at my being

Look into my life
Can you feel my pain
Do you now understand
Why I am who I am

No one can be at fault everytime they are accused
No one can be molded into something that they do not want to be
So why would you ask me to change for you
Are you that important in my life that I would truly want to please you
How can you act so confidently that I am your slave
How do you make me wish I was your slave

Look inside my world
Tell me what you see
Is it dark there
Why can I not see

Look into this life
Can you feel what I feel
This pain is called love
This pain is to real

Every time I look back on what I have done in the past
I feel as though I am indebted to you
Some how you brought me out of this prison cell
The cell that had self contained me all to well
How did you manage to break into my world
How did you accomplish what I by myself never could

Look inside my world
Tell me what you see
I am seeing an Angel
An Angel telling me what to be

Look into my life
Can you feel this joy
The feeling of pleasure
A feeling new to me

Look inside my world
Tell me what you see
Can you see your self
Cause that's all I see

You make up this world
You make this world life
You are the only existing Angel
You are the key to my life




Copyright © poet_of_anger ... [ 2004-02-26 20:58:14]
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Re: Look Inside My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:04:39 PM AEST
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*looking* augh! my eyes! my eyes!! lol, sorry, too many movies... good writing, i like it! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: Look Inside My World (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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I'm looking but it's dark in here... this sounds like something an ex- friend of mine would write... to try and make me understand his life better... and it sounds a bit like me also... good write keep up the good work!


Re: Look Inside My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:42:33 AM AEST
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wow i really like this i cant say poem because I think this would be a great song. Good work
Take Care
Carmen


Re: Look Inside My World (User Rating: 1 )
by jbrow on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:28:53 PM AEST
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I like this one because it looks inside of the soul. real deep.
p's
Gene




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