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Array ( [sid] => 36464 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Say Goodbye [time] => 2004-02-26 16:42:05 [hometext] => Rambling along [bodytext] => Say goodbye, and kiss me,
For the very last time,
Walk away, slowly,
Just don’t turn around,
What you just said,
Made a grown man cry.

Wish you well in the world,
I really do,
But there is a hole now,
No longer your voice,
Gone the frenetic breakfast,
And the calm dinner for two.

Loneliness is a stranger,
But it may become my friend,
If I smile, it’s a lie,
I turn and turn but no one,
Why can’t I call you?
Why never, ever again?

Walk home, kicking stones,
Just me and the road,
Still the taste of your lips,
A heart full of yesterdays,
What to do, all alone,
Broken, completely in two.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 349 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jonteD [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Say Goodbye

Contributed by jonteD on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:42:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Say goodbye, and kiss me,
For the very last time,
Walk away, slowly,
Just don’t turn around,
What you just said,
Made a grown man cry.

Wish you well in the world,
I really do,
But there is a hole now,
No longer your voice,
Gone the frenetic breakfast,
And the calm dinner for two.

Loneliness is a stranger,
But it may become my friend,
If I smile, it’s a lie,
I turn and turn but no one,
Why can’t I call you?
Why never, ever again?

Walk home, kicking stones,
Just me and the road,
Still the taste of your lips,
A heart full of yesterdays,
What to do, all alone,
Broken, completely in two.

Copyright Â© jonteD ... [ 2004-02-26 16:42:05]
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Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:50:28 PM AEST
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Keep rambling along, it'll take awhile to work around this one... Good write, reads like a story...
~Remy~

Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:04:34 PM AEST
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Awww Jon..I'm sorry to read this..it's so sad... Hope you feel better soon....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:13:06 PM AEST
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This just broke my heart. Saying that I can relate is an understatement. I know it hurts, hang in there with the rest of us. You expressed your heart so beautifully in this poem. In time it will get better. Kie

Re: Say Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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kisses, wishes and misses, this poem has it all.......... hugs n' love nessa

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