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Array ( [sid] => 36414 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You are sand dune/ Jsi písečná duna [time] => 2004-02-26 09:22:07 [hometext] => For my very special friend Steve - he gave me nicest days of my life [bodytext] => You are such a sand dune
Warm and beautiful
Every wind pours you
And some carries away your grains

Shades of your life,
White – Inocence and unaffectedness
Red is your heart
Yellow – your soul sunrays

Sandstorm blew you on
Dispersed you all around
And I vainly look for places
Where your grains could find

If I were the whirl
To gather you up
Dune, which showed me kingdom
Which changed my world

I want to hold you in my palms
Never let you fall
Protect against storms
Pour you carefully and slow

And still I want you to know
Whether you are dune or just sand
I love you with all my heart
whether you are here or somewhere else

Ty jsi taková písečná duna,
Hřejivá a krásná
Každý vítr tě přesypává
některý odnáší pryč tvá zrna

odstíny tvého života
bílá – nevinnost a prostota
rudá je tvým srdcem
žlutá v duši tvé sluncem

písečná bouře tě rozdmýchala
koukol tě rozvála
a já marně hledám místa
kde bych tvá zrnka hledala

kéž bych byla vírem
co posbírá tě zpět
dunu, jež ukázala mi království
jež změnila můj svět

chtěla bych tě držet v dlaních
nikdy nepustit
opatrně přesypávat
bránit před bouří

A pořád – chci abys věděl
Jestli jsi duna nebo jenom písek
Pořád tě moc mám ráda
Ať už jsi tu nebo kdekoliv ještě
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You are sand dune Jsi písečná duna

Contributed by Aika on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:22:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You are such a sand dune
Warm and beautiful
Every wind pours you
And some carries away your grains

Shades of your life,
White – Inocence and unaffectedness
Red is your heart
Yellow – your soul sunrays

Sandstorm blew you on
Dispersed you all around
And I vainly look for places
Where your grains could find

If I were the whirl
To gather you up
Dune, which showed me kingdom
Which changed my world

I want to hold you in my palms
Never let you fall
Protect against storms
Pour you carefully and slow

And still I want you to know
Whether you are dune or just sand
I love you with all my heart
whether you are here or somewhere else

Ty jsi taková písečná duna,
Hřejivá a krásná
Každý vítr tě přesypává
některý odnáší pryč tvá zrna

odstíny tvého života
bílá – nevinnost a prostota
rudá je tvým srdcem
žlutá v duši tvé sluncem

písečná bouře tě rozdmýchala
koukol tě rozvála
a já marně hledám místa
kde bych tvá zrnka hledala

kéž bych byla vírem
co posbírá tě zpět
dunu, jež ukázala mi království
jež změnila můj svět

chtěla bych tě držet v dlaních
nikdy nepustit
opatrně přesypávat
bránit před bouří

A pořád – chci abys věděl
Jestli jsi duna nebo jenom písek
Pořád tě moc mám ráda
Ať už jsi tu nebo kdekoliv ještě

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2004-02-26 09:22:07]
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Re: You are sand dune Jsi písečná duna (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:00:46 AM AEST
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Oh Aika......the tenderness, and depth of your love......unnumbered grains of sands in your dune! I got goosebumps with your exquisite wording and imagery!
Oh how beautiful your ways, Aika....they have to be in your heart first before you can write them down on paper!
love you
consue
the love for your friends is very moving!

Re: You are sand dune Jsi písečná duna (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:42:03 PM AEST
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such a loving caring sweet poem for a dear friend, unique ideas too, i love your poetry aika! keep writing! hugs n' love nessa

Re: You are sand dune Jsi písečná duna (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:25:43 AM AEST
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To have a place in a heart so wonderful and loving is truly an honour , something to treasure for a lifetime
Thank you

steve xx

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