Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 17:29:00 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 36343 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fading Inside A Mirage [time] => 2004-02-25 20:53:24 [hometext] => Heh. [bodytext] => You took your time
Then I got mine
We both were fine
But in your mind...

SELF-HURT - BROODING
MIRAGE - YOU THOUGHT
THAT I - WAS WRONG
IT CAN'T - BE BOUGHT
DELUSIONS - YOU FORMED
INSIDE -YOURSELF
WELL BABY - YOU NEED
SOME HELP

We split apart
And then you lost me
You were so bold
But then in your sleep...

SELF-HURT - BROODING
MIRAGE - YOU THOUGHT
THAT I - (YOU'RE) WRONG
IT CAN'T - BE BOUGHT
DELUSIONS - YOU FORMED
INSIDE -YOURSELF
WELL BABY - YOU NEED
SOME HELP

It always is the case
Something so deep in your past you can't erase
And as you mix the days
You wish you would just fade away
Fade away

Your wounds lay so openly
Bleeding so profusely
Why won't you realize
Its your own fingers that lay it wide

God bless my
HATE

SELF-HURT - BROODING
MIRAGE - YOU THOUGHT
THAT I - WAS WRONG
IT CAN'T - BE BOUGHT
DELUSIONS - YOU FORMED
INSIDE -YOURSELF
WELL BABY - YOU NEED
SOME HELP

It always is the case
Something so deep in your past you can't erase
And as you mix the days
You wish you would just fade away
FADE AWAY [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => (Edited by Mod_1 -- Please keep the language clean) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Fading Inside A Mirage

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:53:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



You took your time
Then I got mine
We both were fine
But in your mind...

SELF-HURT - BROODING
MIRAGE - YOU THOUGHT
THAT I - WAS WRONG
IT CAN'T - BE BOUGHT
DELUSIONS - YOU FORMED
INSIDE -YOURSELF
WELL BABY - YOU NEED
SOME HELP

We split apart
And then you lost me
You were so bold
But then in your sleep...

SELF-HURT - BROODING
MIRAGE - YOU THOUGHT
THAT I - (YOU'RE) WRONG
IT CAN'T - BE BOUGHT
DELUSIONS - YOU FORMED
INSIDE -YOURSELF
WELL BABY - YOU NEED
SOME HELP

It always is the case
Something so deep in your past you can't erase
And as you mix the days
You wish you would just fade away
Fade away

Your wounds lay so openly
Bleeding so profusely
Why won't you realize
Its your own fingers that lay it wide

God bless my
HATE

SELF-HURT - BROODING
MIRAGE - YOU THOUGHT
THAT I - WAS WRONG
IT CAN'T - BE BOUGHT
DELUSIONS - YOU FORMED
INSIDE -YOURSELF
WELL BABY - YOU NEED
SOME HELP

It always is the case
Something so deep in your past you can't erase
And as you mix the days
You wish you would just fade away
FADE AWAY




Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2004-02-25 20:53:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Fading Inside A Mirage (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:04:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is really good!


Re: Fading Inside A Mirage (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:23:23 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Wow. I love the powerful anger and hate that just sucks you into this poem. I wish I could have read the original version before it was edited by the mods.


Re: Fading Inside A Mirage (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:07:28 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is good. So full of anger. Love may hurt at times, but you can turn around and kick it right in the butt. *S* Cynthia




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com