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a sunset
Contributed by
Strat
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:25:49 PM in AEST
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The soft grains of the wood
How it runs and spirals like amber smoke
glimmering in the sun it is immortal
untouched by time or space
pure and flawless perfection.
it's beauty is almost to much to bare.
Like the first moments of the sunrise
when the sun reaches the horizon
breaking through, and brilliant in it's colors...
oh the colors;
Oranges, reds, purples, the dance of light fills my senses.
overwhelming me until i can feel nothing else.
sheer terror and euphoria at the same time.
if only it would last forever
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Strat
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2004-02-25 18:25:49]
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Re: a sunset
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:37:39 PM AEST
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there is nothing more beautiful than the picture nature paints in the sky durning sunrise and sunset.The desert sunsets here are some of the most beautiful Iv seen. You captivated me with this write.
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Re: a sunset
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:14:59 PM AEST
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| Unlike you, I'm used to sunrises, especially winter ones - and this brings back their humbling power to me very vividly. Thanks for sharing it. |
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