Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 18:10:49 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 36287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eye contact [time] => 2004-02-25 14:26:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Give me eye contact.
Acknowledge my existence once in a while.
I paint my thoughts across stones that I throw at you.
I always miss your head....
The air feels heavy like a feather...
floating towards the ground,
making the sound,
of a surreal Winters afternoon,
lost just like an airbourne baloon.
Insecurities, in my mind. Something of a different kind.
Its easy to be loved when you're trying so hard to be hated.
Things change
rearrange
but oh how to be caught in the exchange.........
I'd wish you'd give me eye contact girl...
I wish you'd see me the way I see you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 43 [informant] => broken-glass [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Eye contact

Contributed by broken-glass on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:26:01 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Give me eye contact.
Acknowledge my existence once in a while.
I paint my thoughts across stones that I throw at you.
I always miss your head....
The air feels heavy like a feather...
floating towards the ground,
making the sound,
of a surreal Winters afternoon,
lost just like an airbourne baloon.
Insecurities, in my mind. Something of a different kind.
Its easy to be loved when you're trying so hard to be hated.
Things change
rearrange
but oh how to be caught in the exchange.........
I'd wish you'd give me eye contact girl...
I wish you'd see me the way I see you.

Copyright © broken-glass ... [ 2004-02-25 14:26:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Eye contact (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:54:06 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I really liked this one especially the metaphore of .[I paint my thoughts across stones that I throw at you.] good one keep them coming.oh comment one of mine please.

Re: Eye contact (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:39:32 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This was so unique and I loved the expressions you used in this poem. Great one! Kie

Re: Eye contact (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:39:35 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is a great peice!

Re: Eye contact (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 06:51:07 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

*silently appreciates another poem*

Re: Eye contact (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:28:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Beware Chris, it 'tis is true....if they can't look at you.......hollow they be....no depth you see!
People like this make me feel invisible....not tangible.....I don't like the feeling. I want a club to hit them between the eyes, and then after getting their attention helping them realize.......it's bad manners on their part! You said it so eloquently as usual......great poem Chris.......as usual!! Our eyes are windows to our soul.....if someone won't let you take a peek.......they may either have something to hide....or are very weak!
love you
consue

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com