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A man doth stand no longer flesh
Upon the clouds his footsteps dance
Crying rain for lost romance

Hes looking down his eyes aglaze
Golden from the sunlight rays
Lost in thought his heart rethinks
So many chains without the links

Breaking through an angel clear
Crying sad with crimson tear
Her heart is burning, shes searching too
For her stolen soulmate true

She lands upon a cloud so light
Her beauty beams and shes so bright
He looks to her, his words are lost
His body covered in silent frost

He calls to her from heavens gate
She rises to her stolen mate
Her heart aflutter, she races fast
She flies across the heavens vast

Their souls collide, entwined again
Their love blossoms, they cant refrain
Raindrops thunder, tear drops fall
The heavens open, for true loves call

Together now, Forever more
As they open the golden door
Alone to be they never were
She with him and him with her

The book had spoken, its teaching true
The ink had dried and it knew
For love it sung, so gold and pure
It just blossomed on heavens door

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Tears of a Tome II

Contributed by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:18:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

To open up a page afresh
A man doth stand no longer flesh
Upon the clouds his footsteps dance
Crying rain for lost romance

Hes looking down his eyes aglaze
Golden from the sunlight rays
Lost in thought his heart rethinks
So many chains without the links

Breaking through an angel clear
Crying sad with crimson tear
Her heart is burning, shes searching too
For her stolen soulmate true

She lands upon a cloud so light
Her beauty beams and shes so bright
He looks to her, his words are lost
His body covered in silent frost

He calls to her from heavens gate
She rises to her stolen mate
Her heart aflutter, she races fast
She flies across the heavens vast

Their souls collide, entwined again
Their love blossoms, they cant refrain
Raindrops thunder, tear drops fall
The heavens open, for true loves call

Together now, Forever more
As they open the golden door
Alone to be they never were
She with him and him with her

The book had spoken, its teaching true
The ink had dried and it knew
For love it sung, so gold and pure
It just blossomed on heavens door

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-02-24 19:18:29]
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Re: Tears of a Tome II (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:35:33 PM AEST
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absolutely breathtakingly beautiful, what a lovely pair of poems! keep writin' my friend your on a roll! hugs n' love nessa

Re: Tears of a Tome II (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:36:54 PM AEST
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A Masterpeice...capital M. If the first one is better than this I dont think I should read it as I would probably crush my pen in shame. This poem is flawless.

Hats off to ya pal

Larry

Re: Tears of a Tome II (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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Words cannot express how good this poem is. It is truly a masterpiece. Wonderful job keep em coming.
Becky

Re: Tears of a Tome II (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:41:00 PM AEST
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Aww.. Luke, this is wonderful. You've got an awful lot of talent.

Re: Tears of a Tome II (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:46:20 AM AEST
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PLEASE keep writing these!! I am beyond humbled---

*breaks pen in half, shreds notebook, tromps frustrated out of the room*

Great work, Luke.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: Tears of a Tome II (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:06:36 PM AEST
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Lovely write - glad I read the other one first as it does lay the groundwork for this one - and alas a happy ending. Excellent.

smiles
merry

Re: Tears of a Tome II (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:04:08 AM AEST
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Ah, thank you Luke ... I couldn't have coped with a sad ending :))) This is just as splendid as the first Tears of a Tome ... your talent is amazing ... I'm humbled beyond words ... *five stars* ... jan

Re: Tears of a Tome II (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 04:20:31 PM AEST
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I've gotta hand it to ya.... this was phenomenal..... sweet write =)
(and no, I'm not obligated to say that either.... it's quite true...lol)
Really though, I'm speechless.

God bless,
Ellen

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