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10:10 AM

I'm leaving this familar place u want to call home I'm packin my bags puttin my life into a box I'm gonna make a deal with a new city and it feel like my heart is gonna to explode

I'm gonna see the sun rise In my own window. There will be nothing to remind me of u, there won't be anymore World War 2, punchin holes in the walls.

Feel like my heart is gonna explode

There will be no more hittin and no more of this name callin. There will be no more doubts or feelings of worthlessness no more about u bragging about him, there will be no more shoutin there will be no more beatin up my dreams I'm makin a new deal with a new city.

I get to know what freedom is I get to know how it feels to get away from him even though it's not 2 days away but soon it will be no more tears in bed

I'm makin a deal with a new city and it feels like my heart is gonna explode and I like it [comments] => 6 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 54 [informant] => Remi [notes] => (mod 7 - spelling - as requested) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

I feel like my heart is gonna explode

Contributed by Remi on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

I feel like my heart is gonna to explode

10:10 AM

I'm leaving this familar place u want to call home I'm packin my bags puttin my life into a box I'm gonna make a deal with a new city and it feel like my heart is gonna to explode

I'm gonna see the sun rise In my own window. There will be nothing to remind me of u, there won't be anymore World War 2, punchin holes in the walls.

Feel like my heart is gonna explode

There will be no more hittin and no more of this name callin. There will be no more doubts or feelings of worthlessness no more about u bragging about him, there will be no more shoutin there will be no more beatin up my dreams I'm makin a new deal with a new city.

I get to know what freedom is I get to know how it feels to get away from him even though it's not 2 days away but soon it will be no more tears in bed

I'm makin a deal with a new city and it feels like my heart is gonna explode and I like it

Copyright © Remi ... [ 2004-02-24 15:25:58]
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Re: I feel like my heart is gonna explode (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:29:35 PM AEST
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Like it, love it, live it... love the attitude of this thing!! Sweetness, this is good!
~Remy~

Re: I feel like my heart is gonna explode (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:24:42 PM AEST
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This is really well writen! Very sweet!

Re: I feel like my heart is gonna explode (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:34:49 PM AEST
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MOVING ON,SOMETIMES IT'S THE ONLY RIGHT THING TO DO,NO MATTER HOW MUCH IT HURTS! FIND THE FACTS FOR NO NEED TO EVER COME BACK!! A VERY TOUCHING POEM!!!
DAN!!!!

Re: I feel like my heart is gonna explode (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:41:46 PM AEST
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beautiful expression, may you find all you are looking for and then some:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: I feel like my heart is gonna explode (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:47:04 PM AEST
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oh i really like this alot. so awesome. well done.
Arden

Re: I feel like my heart is gonna explode (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:06:43 PM AEST
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BRAVO! Remi.......you've taken your stand........now don't go back no matter how hard it is for you to leave.
This was a wonderful expressing poem...I could feel everything you felt and more!
Oh how I wish you well!
On to better things somewhere new
A different city, different friends. a different fiew!
Wonderful Poem
love you
consue

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