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Array ( [sid] => 36107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Undisturbed Peace pt II [time] => 2004-02-24 11:54:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The dead are walking around at night
Looking for little children to fright
And slowly I feel myself getting up
I find my razor and make a cut
My blood flows better than before
And now it’s my turn to even the score.....

Look, there’s Sue, let’s scare her
Her loudest scream won’t be heard
Slowly I creep up behind
She turns around, now she’s mine
She screams in such horrid ways
But I better hurry to be done by day
I show her images of her pitiful life
And then slash her throat with my shiny knife
She falls to the ground, such a beautiful scene
As I take joy in the remembrance of her screams

Daylight is coming, I walk to my grave
Thinking of the pleasures pitiful Sue gave
I go back underground until the next night
When another helpless soul will become my victim of fright. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 59 [informant] => CuttersAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Undisturbed Peace pt II

Contributed by CuttersAngel on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:54:26 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

The dead are walking around at night
Looking for little children to fright
And slowly I feel myself getting up
I find my razor and make a cut
My blood flows better than before
And now it’s my turn to even the score.....

Look, there’s Sue, let’s scare her
Her loudest scream won’t be heard
Slowly I creep up behind
She turns around, now she’s mine
She screams in such horrid ways
But I better hurry to be done by day
I show her images of her pitiful life
And then slash her throat with my shiny knife
She falls to the ground, such a beautiful scene
As I take joy in the remembrance of her screams

Daylight is coming, I walk to my grave
Thinking of the pleasures pitiful Sue gave
I go back underground until the next night
When another helpless soul will become my victim of fright.

Copyright Â© CuttersAngel ... [ 2004-02-24 11:54:26]
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Re: Undisturbed Peace pt II (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:35:30 PM AEST
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Creepy, gothic, definitely a "psychotic" poem... almost reads like a NIN music video!!
~Remy~

Re: Undisturbed Peace pt II (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 04:54:59 AM AEST
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uh uh....NIN is way better....nothing, nothing like this, more like slipknot or ozzy

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