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Array ( [sid] => 36097 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HEAT OF LOVE [time] => 2004-02-24 09:57:11 [hometext] => Young lovers ignite a flame.....older more disciplined lovers, no less passionate, comfortable same [bodytext] =>

Young love is a flame, very pretty, bright.
Hurry, skurry, flurry, fever of excitement!
Flare up, Flame up, Fire up, Frenzy night!
Refreshing, intensifying, exciting, never stagnant!

Young love can be fickle, only light
and flickerng.
With irregularity, uncertainty, with aching.
Frequency, repetition, many times, oftness.
Never enough, again and again,
with braveness.



The heat of love for the older disciplined,
is like hot coals burning unquenchable.
Security of action, slow going, familiar, usual.
No less passionate, by any means, comfortable.
Like Frosting on a cake, covers already total!

Risen above many concerns, troubles,
life itself.
More giving, sacrificing, forgetting oneself.
Endearing, amorous glances, true feelings
of each other.
An enduring love, tested for years,
a strong anchor!

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
February 23, 2004

"And so it is, young
or old, a wonderful
gift from our creator!"





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HEAT OF LOVE

Contributed by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:57:11 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems





Young love is a flame, very pretty, bright.
Hurry, skurry, flurry, fever of excitement!
Flare up, Flame up, Fire up, Frenzy night!
Refreshing, intensifying, exciting, never stagnant!

Young love can be fickle, only light
and flickerng.
With irregularity, uncertainty, with aching.
Frequency, repetition, many times, oftness.
Never enough, again and again,
with braveness.



The heat of love for the older disciplined,
is like hot coals burning unquenchable.
Security of action, slow going, familiar, usual.
No less passionate, by any means, comfortable.
Like Frosting on a cake, covers already total!

Risen above many concerns, troubles,
life itself.
More giving, sacrificing, forgetting oneself.
Endearing, amorous glances, true feelings
of each other.
An enduring love, tested for years,
a strong anchor!

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
February 23, 2004

"And so it is, young
or old, a wonderful
gift from our creator!"









Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2004-02-24 09:57:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: HEAT OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:09:57 AM AEST
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That was like a breath of fresh air!!!! Thank you.

A big red rose for ya :o)

Larry


Re: HEAT OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:21:10 AM AEST
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so true so true, frosting i likes better too lol, am out of cake mix but your poem is simply yummy connie, much wisdom here, beautiful as always:) huggies, woofies n' love nessa


Re: HEAT OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:35:41 AM AEST
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I just wrote something similar for my husband about the difference between real love and the kind we see in the movies. I love your outlook! Keep it coming.
Stitch


Re: HEAT OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:39:14 AM AEST
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The Critters Lady pens greatness
---------------------------------------------
Way back in time when I was young,
Like Critters says, Just sex was sung,
But now the time has come with love,
That has a mandate from above...


Re: HEAT OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:20:52 AM AEST
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I got a taste for frostin this morning! You made me smile again! Old or young we all need a little passion and lovin.....Loved this one ConSue. Kie


Re: HEAT OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:41:11 PM AEST
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I agree with Kie Old or young we all need it it helps make us live longer with love in our hearts! Christina


Re: HEAT OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:26:32 PM AEST
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THE LONGER IT GOES THE STRONGER THE HOLD! FEWER SURPRISES & UNKNOWN FEARS!! GREAT POEM!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!


Re: HEAT OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 06:02:22 PM AEST
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Hmmm, I love cake. Cake always has to have frosting, and I always like a little dollop of whipped cream on top. This poem is yummy! I love it.

Love you too, hugs,
Rita




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