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Array ( [sid] => 36052 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Through my eyes............. [time] => 2004-02-23 22:21:38 [hometext] => Please read this, i want to get some feedback [bodytext] => I see love through the eyes of annoyance
What purpose is it truly serving?
Love is frustrating and is only causing me pain

I see relationships through the eyes of perplexity
Why am I so connected to you when it will never last?
Relationships are confusing and are only causing me impatience

I see our future through the eyes of fear
Where are we going to end up?
Our future is scary and will only cause me sorrow

I see you through the eyes of false perception
Who is the real person I’m falling in love with?
You are deceiving and will only cause me loneliness

I see love, relationships, our future, and you through the eyes of Christ
Why do I worry when I know my heart is protected?
Love, relationships, our future, and you are beautiful and will only cause me joy indefinitely
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Through my eyes.............

Contributed by bychristimsaved on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I see love through the eyes of annoyance
What purpose is it truly serving?
Love is frustrating and is only causing me pain

I see relationships through the eyes of perplexity
Why am I so connected to you when it will never last?
Relationships are confusing and are only causing me impatience

I see our future through the eyes of fear
Where are we going to end up?
Our future is scary and will only cause me sorrow

I see you through the eyes of false perception
Who is the real person I’m falling in love with?
You are deceiving and will only cause me loneliness

I see love, relationships, our future, and you through the eyes of Christ
Why do I worry when I know my heart is protected?
Love, relationships, our future, and you are beautiful and will only cause me joy indefinitely

Copyright Â© bychristimsaved ... [ 2004-02-23 22:21:38]
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Re: Through my eyes............. (User Rating: 1 )
by skelington on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:29:50 PM AEST
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I think its a good piece, I too am going through this type of relationship so I kno what you r going through. I like how you talk about religion and faith, for that is all that is actually true in the world today. I also like the fact that you say this in the presence of seeing throught the "eyes" of different things. It makes it very significant. but all in all a good piece of literature.. keep writing

Re: Through my eyes............. (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:32:24 AM AEST
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Doing what life is to you in poetry is fun and good... you are doing this life thing into a poetic form.. and you have a way with words that i love.. this piece is good.

Re: Through my eyes............. (User Rating: 1 )
by misheleluv on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:39:31 AM AEST
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I liked this, at first it seems your problems are due to a lack of faith, yet, in the conclusion
you place all of those doubts in the hands of faith....
I believe everyone is hesitant when falling in love at first, for fear of being hurt;
but if we don't take chances ~ jump off the edge ~ we accomplish nothing...
I could truely relate to this piece...
nice work!
Michelle

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