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Array ( [sid] => 36048 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Dream [time] => 2004-02-23 22:04:34 [hometext] => Another step in the journey. [bodytext] =>
An incredible dream
I didn’t want to awake
So real it did seem
All night, I wanted it to take

Never will I forget
The smell, the touch, the taste
An incredible intimacy
Love without haste

The funny thing is
When it comes to dreams
Where reality exists
They cannot, it seems

My hands are shaking
And I can’t breathe
The cold and the dark
Slowly consume me

The scariest of all
Dreams we hope won’t last
Things we don’t wish to recall
Maybe things from the past

It seems they’re capable
Where dreams fail miserably
Nightmares are able
To coexist with reality

One day I hope
To prove myself wrong
With life I must cope
Breath to breath, I go on

I want the dream
I want to smile
No more extremes
Or changing from mile to mile

I want to know
The pain can be left behind
Never again will it show
With me, no longer entwined

Is it possible?
Will I ever know?
Life, more than a shamble?
I, will make it so!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 21 [informant] => ToriVeigh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
A Dream

Contributed by ToriVeigh on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:04:34 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems




An incredible dream
I didn’t want to awake
So real it did seem
All night, I wanted it to take

Never will I forget
The smell, the touch, the taste
An incredible intimacy
Love without haste

The funny thing is
When it comes to dreams
Where reality exists
They cannot, it seems

My hands are shaking
And I can’t breathe
The cold and the dark
Slowly consume me

The scariest of all
Dreams we hope won’t last
Things we don’t wish to recall
Maybe things from the past

It seems they’re capable
Where dreams fail miserably
Nightmares are able
To coexist with reality

One day I hope
To prove myself wrong
With life I must cope
Breath to breath, I go on

I want the dream
I want to smile
No more extremes
Or changing from mile to mile

I want to know
The pain can be left behind
Never again will it show
With me, no longer entwined

Is it possible?
Will I ever know?
Life, more than a shamble?
I, will make it so!




Copyright © ToriVeigh ... [ 2004-02-23 22:04:34]
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Re: A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:38:10 AM AEST
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Great write and optimism!
PumpkinPie


Re: A Dream (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 06:23:47 AM AEST
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Some people with vision, turn dreams into reality. Some people with doubt and insecurities turn nightmares into reality. Why don't you start with a vision?




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