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With the threads of all my seams
Show you how it feels to want to die
And fly with you so very, very high
I wish you could see this through my eyes
All the stars in all the skies
Couldn't give me reason to live now
I want to stay with you but I can't imagine how

If I could I'd drown you in my tears
Take us both away from here
I would suffocate you with my love
Leave behind the coarse fabric I'm made of
If I could I'd unravel my soul
Set it free to make it whole
There's nothing left for me in this void
I feel I've reached the end and now my will is devoid

Would you come with me to paradise?
I can help you pay the price
Give my own to make your life worth more
I'll build a bridge to lead you to the door
If you don't follow, I'll wait for you
There's nothing I wouldn't do
I'll never wander too far away
I'll always be with you, whatever comes, there's a way [comments] => 11 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 14 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Tie You Up In Dreams

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:36:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I wish I could tie you up in dreams
With the threads of all my seams
Show you how it feels to want to die
And fly with you so very, very high
I wish you could see this through my eyes
All the stars in all the skies
Couldn't give me reason to live now
I want to stay with you but I can't imagine how

If I could I'd drown you in my tears
Take us both away from here
I would suffocate you with my love
Leave behind the coarse fabric I'm made of
If I could I'd unravel my soul
Set it free to make it whole
There's nothing left for me in this void
I feel I've reached the end and now my will is devoid

Would you come with me to paradise?
I can help you pay the price
Give my own to make your life worth more
I'll build a bridge to lead you to the door
If you don't follow, I'll wait for you
There's nothing I wouldn't do
I'll never wander too far away
I'll always be with you, whatever comes, there's a way

Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2004-02-23 18:36:34]
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:45:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Moonlit... very original

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:03:48 PM AEST
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This poem gave me a feeling of warmth inside. It was beautiful and it flowed, I never wanted it to end. Excellent write. Kie

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:32:32 PM AEST
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I loved the first verse so well!
I loved it all,Great poem so beautifully done! Christina

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:48:58 PM AEST
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What a great poem moonlit, i wanted to read more and more of it so i read it like 5 times, i loved the structure and i love the rhyme scheme a very original and expert piece

Luke

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:28:58 AM AEST
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WOW dee very good! I hope the very best for you!

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:07:21 AM AEST
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Very nice.
Loved it.
I could just feel the words flow...

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:15:39 AM AEST
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Wow, there's a lot of imagery in there, and it flows very nicely.

I like it very much :)

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:20:51 AM AEST
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Great job. You have a very decent mastery of the English language. Great rhyme. And a beautiful theme. Keep it up.

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:47:48 AM AEST
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awww sweet!!! hugs n' love nessa

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:25:19 AM AEST
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With all my heart I hope your Love follows you. You're worth it. True love, you posess. May true love hold you always in its embrace.
Take care.
David

Re: Tie You Up In Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:17:19 PM AEST
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God, D.... I'm crying. With your soul, for your sanity. Know that I love you with all my being, and that if I could be closer to you now, I would leap the bounds and jump to you. I am always with you. And your always in my thoughts. I know you can get through this, your so much stronger than me.

And by the way, a beautiful poem, and I, too, love the images.

Jaime

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