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Array ( [sid] => 36005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just smile [time] => 2004-02-23 16:29:29 [hometext] => if only they could be there for me, i would love them even more :( [bodytext] => why cant you just smile
like a warm summers day
when i need cheering up
or if a friend has fallen down
and cant get up on their own
why cant you just laugh
like an old car on a cold day
or when a joke cant be helped
or when my cat meows too loud
in the middle of your favorite movie
why cant you just be kind
like a cuddly kitten in my arms
or when i need someone to talk to
when i get into trouble and I am stuck
why aren't you there for me
you are my dad aren't you? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 63 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )
just smile

Contributed by SAT on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:29:29 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday



why cant you just smile
like a warm summers day
when i need cheering up
or if a friend has fallen down
and cant get up on their own
why cant you just laugh
like an old car on a cold day
or when a joke cant be helped
or when my cat meows too loud
in the middle of your favorite movie
why cant you just be kind
like a cuddly kitten in my arms
or when i need someone to talk to
when i get into trouble and I am stuck
why aren't you there for me
you are my dad aren't you?




Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-02-23 16:29:29]
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Re: just smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:43:24 PM AEST
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aww... beautiful poem. I hope you show it to him.


Re: just smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:15:04 AM AEST
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Your poem touched me deeply and brought tears to my eyes. I can hear your heart crying out. I hope you show this to him as well. Thank you so much for sharing a very moving poem. Kie




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