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Array ( [sid] => 35982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ellyne [time] => 2004-02-23 13:39:10 [hometext] => First loves' are crazy conundrums..no matter how long ago and how far it has all gone away..we still think of them. I do at least. Here's a small tribute to my infatuation...to a long vanished friend..heh..heh [bodytext] => [E]nroute to reason
I was ensnared
by that lovely vision
of beauty unmarred

[L]osing all sense
of all direction
I roam the expense
of my infatuation

[L]ove was kindled
passion aflamed
my heart was ladened
with amorous acclaim

[Y]our lovely mirage
your angelic countenance
holds hostage my heart
my absolute existance

[N]ever before
in my life's experience
have I felt evermore
this whirlwind of emotions

[E]ntangled am I
in this wishful web
with no inkling why
nor any hope in my stead. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Ellyne

Contributed by baronhawk on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 01:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

[E]nroute to reason
I was ensnared
by that lovely vision
of beauty unmarred

[L]osing all sense
of all direction
I roam the expense
of my infatuation

[L]ove was kindled
passion aflamed
my heart was ladened
with amorous acclaim

[Y]our lovely mirage
your angelic countenance
holds hostage my heart
my absolute existance

[N]ever before
in my life's experience
have I felt evermore
this whirlwind of emotions

[E]ntangled am I
in this wishful web
with no inkling why
nor any hope in my stead.

Copyright © baronhawk ... [ 2004-02-23 13:39:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ellyne (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 01:44:32 PM AEST
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Many a woman would swoon to have inspired such beautiful words. Nice stuff.
Stitch

Re: Ellyne (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:41:17 PM AEST
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Some of us never can forget or sit aside our first true love. Life does have to continue though. Lovely write. Rita

Re: Ellyne (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:24:09 AM AEST
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Definitely the first acrostic poem I've seen on this site. Very good. Yes, I know what you mean about first loves! I'm going through some of the sorrow now.
Keep writing.
Andrew

Re: Ellyne (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 02:39:42 PM AEST
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Ain't love grand!!!!
And my question would be - did she know you were infatuated with her, or were you too shy to ask her out on a date?
Wonderful poem.

merry

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