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I feel released yet still not free,
As I sink lower, my lungs empty,
With thoughts of what I used to be,
The forgotten pleasure of a lovers decree,
Casting aside my humble plea,
From reality I begin to flee,
Soon the gates of hell, I shall see.
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Shimmered Reflection

Contributed by confused_nutter on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:03:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Darkness surrounding me,
I feel released yet still not free,
As I sink lower, my lungs empty,
With thoughts of what I used to be,
The forgotten pleasure of a lovers decree,
Casting aside my humble plea,
From reality I begin to flee,
Soon the gates of hell, I shall see.

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Re: Shimmered Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:15:42 PM AEST
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very dark and Vivid. loved it loved it loved it. awesome job.
Arden

Re: Shimmered Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:18:08 PM AEST
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Wow that was well written even if it was short, I liked it very much.

Re: Shimmered Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:35:37 PM AEST
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i loved it so well writen especially the last line"soon the gates of hell, i shall see." great job

Re: Shimmered Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 05:50:19 PM AEST
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This is well written!

Re: Shimmered Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by kissez_x0x0_hugz on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 09:32:26 PM AEST
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That was awesome poem..short but very powerful choice of words! I really enjoyed it! Keep on writing....I imagined it while I was reading it..KeEp On WrItInG u R vErY tAlEnTeD!!
x0x0x~CaNdIe~

Re: Shimmered Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:00:21 PM AEST
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Ooohhh, this is really dark. Again powerful and descriptive, you've got real talent

Love Dawny x

Re: Shimmered Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:37:50 PM AEST
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Excellent write, keep em coming, well done yet again.

Ali xx

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