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Array ( [sid] => 35886 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All my need [time] => 2004-02-22 13:27:22 [hometext] => Who doesn't want an all true and encompassing love? [bodytext] => If only all I need be in you
My life sweats will drain away
And pleasure into my mind creep in
To shatter the rust swords in my heart
With true love, true light and true life

CHORUS
I need ears to listen to me
I need lips to kiss me
I need hands to touch me
I need you to love me

All I need for me is a you
That will walk with me all moments
To quench all that ever grieve my soul
I need a you that will love me forever
With honesty, modesty and earnestly

CHORUS
I need a body to lean on
I need a back to fall on
I need a love to live on
I need a you to rely on

A love that will be food to my soul
Is all I ever know I need from you
Sp I can close my eyes and see your face
So I can lick my lips and taste your heart
Without worrying, lying and dieing
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All my need

Contributed by uchendu on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:27:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

If only all I need be in you
My life sweats will drain away
And pleasure into my mind creep in
To shatter the rust swords in my heart
With true love, true light and true life

CHORUS
I need ears to listen to me
I need lips to kiss me
I need hands to touch me
I need you to love me

All I need for me is a you
That will walk with me all moments
To quench all that ever grieve my soul
I need a you that will love me forever
With honesty, modesty and earnestly

CHORUS
I need a body to lean on
I need a back to fall on
I need a love to live on
I need a you to rely on

A love that will be food to my soul
Is all I ever know I need from you
Sp I can close my eyes and see your face
So I can lick my lips and taste your heart
Without worrying, lying and dieing

Copyright © uchendu ... [ 2004-02-22 13:27:22]
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Re: All my need (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:30:14 PM AEST
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I need all of you on here to look into this piece with all criticisms you can summon out of you.. thank you all

Re: All my need (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 05:31:55 PM AEST
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The only criticism I would have is that you should carefully spellcheck before posting the poem ... but apart from that I think this is a very well written song ... it flows well and I can almost hear it in my mind ... the words are beautifully written - you have great talent ... Jan

Re: All my need (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:06:50 PM AEST
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Dear friend,
I need one of them too.
wow they keep getting better, better, better.
The more writers u read the more U will get inspired.
I know by now U know what I mean about this site.
U will make life time friends here.
I'm so happy U sent me the e-mail about wanting to write songs. Even more happy to see U posting here.
keep it up.
luv, huggs, friends,
emy

Re: All my need (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:19:11 PM AEST
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well my friend you have done it again...this is quite beautiful you never cease to amaze me and i expect nothing less from you..great job ...as always....it is a love that we all need...beautifully written ....slr

Re: All my need (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:24:27 PM AEST
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who wouldn't need this.. guess I need it too
the writing is good.. words fail me

Re: All my need (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonthewell_chic on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:04:56 PM AEST
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i really enjoy the concrete images you used to describe such abstract feelings. i feel a great sense of spirit in your words. keep up the good work.

Re: All my need (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:32:00 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful song G.. i love the lyrics and the couse..the last verse is well my favorite ..i love how you put that...you neve cease to amaze me my friend....take care..slr

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