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Senses abandoned, buried beneath the ocean.
Blinded by, the ever growing light,
Creeping closer, this spiteful night.
Hiding away from my own reflection,
Fleeing from my scarred complexion.
Over my shoulder, the faintest sound,
Always too afraid, to merely look round.
Too scared to listen, but unable to speak,
Shuddering at the distant creek.
Everything, anything, this is my fear,
What I must do, becomes frightfully clear… [comments] => 6 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 36 [informant] => confused_nutter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Fear

Contributed by confused_nutter on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:17:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Towering over me, compressing my emotion,
Senses abandoned, buried beneath the ocean.
Blinded by, the ever growing light,
Creeping closer, this spiteful night.
Hiding away from my own reflection,
Fleeing from my scarred complexion.
Over my shoulder, the faintest sound,
Always too afraid, to merely look round.
Too scared to listen, but unable to speak,
Shuddering at the distant creek.
Everything, anything, this is my fear,
What I must do, becomes frightfully clear…

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Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:36:18 PM AEST
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whoa creepy. but sad. it pulls you in makes you feel like your atually there. great great write!
Arden

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:38:53 PM AEST
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very great poem i like the way it all flows together

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:39:48 PM AEST
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wow what a beautifully written poem.. i was recommended your work by a good friend, and am glad! it was definitely worth looking up.. this is amazing..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by kissez_x0x0_hugz on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:53:12 PM AEST
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very creepy..but in a good way creepy! does that make sense? all i want you to know is that i admire ur talent i wish i could have some talent like ur's but poetry just comes from what i feel and what i feel i write down on paper and that is maybe why it isn't that well written...bcuz my life is not well written! lol yea so im commenting on all of ur poems they are awsome
x0x0x~CaNdIe~

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:02:32 PM AEST
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It is creepy, but in a good way!! You have a great talent for descriptive writing, and it flows really well. Glad I had a look at your stuff, its really good

Love Dawny x

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:34:58 PM AEST
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Look likes Dawny got there before me AGAIN, lol so all I can really say is well done another good one and I agree with all that has been said so far!

Ali xx

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