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Array ( [sid] => 35836 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Heart [time] => 2004-02-22 00:58:17 [hometext] => I guess we've all been there. [bodytext] => Another broken heart,
tossed into this vicious world,
Scattering and misplacing an
Already heartless girl
Followed by this shadow
Who’s her only soul companion
Feeling worthless and alone
Just like planned in the long run
She bled from love
Lost her own flesh and blood
How much can this poor girl bleed
Sanity’s gone
No more love to go wrong
Her dark shadow is all she needs
Misery leaves a crimson trail
In the path that she must take
She can’t afford to loose much more
What’s left of her hearts’ at steak?
I’m cold.. I’m exhausted
No tears left to cry
Just let me hide, with what’s left of my life
As I’m placed in this world to die.
11/19/03
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Broken Heart

Contributed by BettieGirl on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:58:17 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Another broken heart,
tossed into this vicious world,
Scattering and misplacing an
Already heartless girl
Followed by this shadow
Who’s her only soul companion
Feeling worthless and alone
Just like planned in the long run
She bled from love
Lost her own flesh and blood
How much can this poor girl bleed
Sanity’s gone
No more love to go wrong
Her dark shadow is all she needs
Misery leaves a crimson trail
In the path that she must take
She can’t afford to loose much more
What’s left of her hearts’ at steak?
I’m cold.. I’m exhausted
No tears left to cry
Just let me hide, with what’s left of my life
As I’m placed in this world to die.
11/19/03

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Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:31:29 AM AEST
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very heartfelt write indeed!! I have felt this way at a point in my life.. very sad but awesome write!! greatjob!!

JENNA

Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:25:07 PM AEST
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awww this is really sad! really good write! but sad!

Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by nite_jade on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:33:26 AM AEST
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i know how you feel my heart has been broken 3 times now and i feel i can never love again good poem

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