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I cant believe that I found my hole
too look in the mirror
through the mirror
and see all I am
all I want to be
cause of all the pain you caused me
I cannot stop you
for you rapped me and beat me
till I cried and screamed to die
but now that I’ve killed you
hid you in my box no one will ever find you
the rapist,
the beater,
the murderer
and now you’ve been murder
but what can you do for you cannot hurt me no more
for I’ve tasted your blood
and spit on your grave
and hid my head in the sight of your gain
swallowed you hole
when I saw your face
as I came at you that night with the blade
as you came and had your last fun with me
while I stared at you when the blade took your blood
and sucked in your last breath
looking into your eyes I saw all your fear
and how afraid I made you feel
now I can return the favor
for a life sentence is nothing
as long I got
my justice
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sLay The RapIsT

Contributed by AmaNdAsHepArD on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:47:43 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I cant believe I’m not alone
I cant believe that I found my hole
too look in the mirror
through the mirror
and see all I am
all I want to be
cause of all the pain you caused me
I cannot stop you
for you rapped me and beat me
till I cried and screamed to die
but now that I’ve killed you
hid you in my box no one will ever find you
the rapist,
the beater,
the murderer
and now you’ve been murder
but what can you do for you cannot hurt me no more
for I’ve tasted your blood
and spit on your grave
and hid my head in the sight of your gain
swallowed you hole
when I saw your face
as I came at you that night with the blade
as you came and had your last fun with me
while I stared at you when the blade took your blood
and sucked in your last breath
looking into your eyes I saw all your fear
and how afraid I made you feel
now I can return the favor
for a life sentence is nothing
as long I got
my justice

Copyright Â© AmaNdAsHepArD ... [ 2004-02-22 00:47:43]
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Re: sLay The RapIsT (User Rating: 1 )
by jackofspades on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:59:10 AM AEST
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Very inserted view
with a twist on the perpective of the poem
at first i thought the poem was in the perpective of a rapists victim...

Great stuff well done

ryan :D

Re: sLay The RapIsT (User Rating: 1 )
by BettieGirl on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:01:11 AM AEST
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Wow, this poem is really intense. You brought tears to my eyes by the first line.

Re: sLay The RapIsT (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:27:01 PM AEST
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Very dark and yet deep poem. I like the perspective, and how you described the fear in the rapist's eyes. It created a picture inside my mind.

Queen_Dolly

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