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Array ( [sid] => 35815 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hang Your Head Over [time] => 2004-02-21 20:12:50 [hometext] => The format is incomplete; cut some out to make it more of a poem. [bodytext] => I feel you hating so much
As our pair of lips touch
And I can't help but wonder
How are you doing?
Are you still whoring around?
Going down for a man's silver
Well, I'm really not surprised
Its always been your guise
To rend the trust I would gather

You cut me so deep
You cut me so deep that...


I
THINK ABOUT ITS TIME
TO REPLACE YOUR EYES
WITH
SOMEONE ELSE'S

I hope you take your time
Trying to figure out who stole your mind
And if you stain my sight
Maybe I'll block you out, so I don't snap your spine
Can you fade from me?
I would do it for you if you so please
Your kisses torment me
As you drop down to your knees

I
THINK ABOUT ITS TIME
TO REPLACE YOUR EYES
WITH
SOMEONE ELSE'S

BEGONE

A SPIRIT OF MALICE KICKS IN, As Your Heart IS CLINCHED WITHIN
MY FIST, DRAINING IT Of What Exists - THE LOVE SOAKED IN SIN
OUR LOVE SOAKED IN SIN

Hang your head over
Hang you head over
And hear the blade sing
Down upon you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Hang Your Head Over

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I feel you hating so much
As our pair of lips touch
And I can't help but wonder
How are you doing?
Are you still whoring around?
Going down for a man's silver
Well, I'm really not surprised
Its always been your guise
To rend the trust I would gather

You cut me so deep
You cut me so deep that...


I
THINK ABOUT ITS TIME
TO REPLACE YOUR EYES
WITH
SOMEONE ELSE'S

I hope you take your time
Trying to figure out who stole your mind
And if you stain my sight
Maybe I'll block you out, so I don't snap your spine
Can you fade from me?
I would do it for you if you so please
Your kisses torment me
As you drop down to your knees

I
THINK ABOUT ITS TIME
TO REPLACE YOUR EYES
WITH
SOMEONE ELSE'S

BEGONE

A SPIRIT OF MALICE KICKS IN, As Your Heart IS CLINCHED WITHIN
MY FIST, DRAINING IT Of What Exists - THE LOVE SOAKED IN SIN
OUR LOVE SOAKED IN SIN

Hang your head over
Hang you head over
And hear the blade sing
Down upon you




Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2004-02-21 20:12:50]
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Re: Hang Your Head Over (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:28:21 PM AEST
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This is really sweet i wouldnt mind hearin this to music


Re: Hang Your Head Over (User Rating: 1 )
by sickness16 on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:15:54 PM AEST
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I like youre poem/song a lot. I wouldn't mind tryin to play this on my guitar or somethin. Kudos, buddy!


Re: Hang Your Head Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:59:18 PM AEST
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Wow.....intence stuff sounds like she got the guillitine at the end?? hey read one of mine, you might find some of mine intence stuff. see ya Wes...




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