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Array ( [sid] => 35814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold and Empty [time] => 2004-02-21 20:03:34 [hometext] => Thank you for taking the time to read this. You can send comments to Banefulsecrets@aol.com My poetry is also posted at www.maxpages.com/insanepoetry13.com please visit. thanx. [bodytext] => I woke up this morning
with you in my arms
to a beautiful sunrise

You felt so warm against me
While I felt so cold inside

You help me to remember what makes me real
Pain, grief, despair, love
All dreaded emotions
I feel bereft without

Sweet kisses at sunrise
Remind me of what I will never have

No one could ever love me
No one could ever kiss me like that
Never again

I'm too cold, too detached

Every self inflicted scar
A flash of searing heat to fight the cold

A cold numbness
Could I ever feel your love? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Devnet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Cold and Empty

Contributed by Devnet on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:03:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I woke up this morning
with you in my arms
to a beautiful sunrise

You felt so warm against me
While I felt so cold inside

You help me to remember what makes me real
Pain, grief, despair, love
All dreaded emotions
I feel bereft without

Sweet kisses at sunrise
Remind me of what I will never have

No one could ever love me
No one could ever kiss me like that
Never again

I'm too cold, too detached

Every self inflicted scar
A flash of searing heat to fight the cold

A cold numbness
Could I ever feel your love?

Copyright © Devnet ... [ 2004-02-21 20:03:34]
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Re: Cold and Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:27:15 PM AEST
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This is very sweet!

Re: Cold and Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Arius-Inues on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:33:49 PM AEST
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I know what your thakin about! very well writen.

Re: Cold and Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:45:06 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC! Enjoyed your poem. Kie

Re: Cold and Empty (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:49:42 PM AEST
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Good write, I enjoyed this read. Welcome to YPDC, the best of the net.

aimie

Re: Cold and Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by sickness16 on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:17:56 PM AEST
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Wow, you're good! This describes me almost every morning! Keep it up!

Re: Cold and Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:55:13 PM AEST
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There is always a love for someone out there don't ever give up,ok? but keep those great poems a coming,ok? Oh check out one of mine please. Wes...

Re: Cold and Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 09:22:26 AM AEST
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That is very well structured, keep writing you have a real talent, i enjoyed the impact that left on me.

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