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Array ( [sid] => 35794 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my flawed character [time] => 2004-02-21 16:37:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don't know who I am,
Unpredictable and hypocritical,
A half formed egotist who lacks conviction,
I'm often trapped inside myself,
Wrapped up in insecurity
and hiding in depression
Yet... still desiring happiness.
I can sit in the midst of someone elses social bliss and
still crave isolation.
But watch me soak up ecstacia
from the throbbing humanity of my friends through an ultraviolet haze.

I'm set in my ways of change.
These holes in my psyche don't help;
the void of lonliness and the lust for love that distracts me mentally and defies me physcially.
I crave reciprocation of a deeper feeling, but this adolescent frustration makes it harder.

Looking to live preoccupies my life
but it never comes fast enough, I want it all, now, I want to dream my dream and wake up to the same reality.
My personal prophecies intertwine with my current desires and young female perfection leaves its impression on my mind.
It's as much as I can do to exist here, surely it would be easier to by happiness in a bottle?

I'll go through life and enjoy the ride, I'll keep looking and keep hoping to be found, and always try to end on
a positive note. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 43 [informant] => scribe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

my flawed character

Contributed by scribe on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 04:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I don't know who I am,
Unpredictable and hypocritical,
A half formed egotist who lacks conviction,
I'm often trapped inside myself,
Wrapped up in insecurity
and hiding in depression
Yet... still desiring happiness.
I can sit in the midst of someone elses social bliss and
still crave isolation.
But watch me soak up ecstacia
from the throbbing humanity of my friends through an ultraviolet haze.

I'm set in my ways of change.
These holes in my psyche don't help;
the void of lonliness and the lust for love that distracts me mentally and defies me physcially.
I crave reciprocation of a deeper feeling, but this adolescent frustration makes it harder.

Looking to live preoccupies my life
but it never comes fast enough, I want it all, now, I want to dream my dream and wake up to the same reality.
My personal prophecies intertwine with my current desires and young female perfection leaves its impression on my mind.
It's as much as I can do to exist here, surely it would be easier to by happiness in a bottle?

I'll go through life and enjoy the ride, I'll keep looking and keep hoping to be found, and always try to end on
a positive note.

Copyright © scribe ... [ 2004-02-21 16:37:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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