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VICTORY
Contributed by
GODSBESTIMAGE
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Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:36:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Jesus is coming back without a spot or wrinkle
He's coming back as fast as your eyes can twinkle
Be ready and don't you finkle
Don't be asleep like Rip Van Winkle
If you miss of Jesus return
Hell is where you're going to burn
So be ready and wait your turn
Your rewards, you deserve to earn
I want to hear him say, 'Well done'
VICTORY, you have won
Gwendolyn M Barden
Copyright ©2004 Gwendolyn M Barden
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GODSBESTIMAGE
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2004-02-21 10:36:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: VICTORY
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lionel on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:55:47 AM AEST (User
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Gwen, aren't you afraid you may scare some people into heaven that are not supposed to be there? I'll bet you're not. |
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Re: VICTORY
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:33:51 PM AEST (User
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the poem itself was good, but afraid I am a non believer, and will remain that way unless he magically appears in front of me, and all the worlds ills disappear just as quick! So guess I'll see you all below :), for this reason, sorry, I only rated it a 4 |
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