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Array ( [sid] => 35769 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-02-21 10:03:18 [hometext] => From my own experience [bodytext] => I’m waiting for you, by my side,
But you never come, although I’ve tried.
I used persuasion, but didn’t succeed,
How can I win? Should I plead?
When you turn away, I break down,
I try to make you laugh, but you just frown.

I remember the day, when we first met,
But what happened next, I must regret.
I hurt you so much, that I know,
I wish we had time, time to grow.
With the past behind us, I’m still depressed,
It’s my fault that we never progressed.

We used to talk. Almost every night,
But then things went wrong, we started to fight.
I can’t believe things went so bad
Being without you, drives me mad.
From when we met, the 14th of May,
However long it takes, I will pay.

For you to kiss me would be bliss,
Your soft touch, that I will miss.
Just to hold your hand, I would be content,
But you wont accept my compliment.
I feel your body so close to mine,
But I’ve gone too far, I’ve crossed the line.

But now it is over, life will continue,
These feelings I have, I must learn to live through.
Perhaps in the future, we will be together,
Never broken, our strongest tether.
But as you walk in to the dark,
I realise, we will always be apart.
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Alone

Contributed by confused_nutter on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:03:18 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I’m waiting for you, by my side,
But you never come, although I’ve tried.
I used persuasion, but didn’t succeed,
How can I win? Should I plead?
When you turn away, I break down,
I try to make you laugh, but you just frown.

I remember the day, when we first met,
But what happened next, I must regret.
I hurt you so much, that I know,
I wish we had time, time to grow.
With the past behind us, I’m still depressed,
It’s my fault that we never progressed.

We used to talk. Almost every night,
But then things went wrong, we started to fight.
I can’t believe things went so bad
Being without you, drives me mad.
From when we met, the 14th of May,
However long it takes, I will pay.

For you to kiss me would be bliss,
Your soft touch, that I will miss.
Just to hold your hand, I would be content,
But you wont accept my compliment.
I feel your body so close to mine,
But I’ve gone too far, I’ve crossed the line.

But now it is over, life will continue,
These feelings I have, I must learn to live through.
Perhaps in the future, we will be together,
Never broken, our strongest tether.
But as you walk in to the dark,
I realise, we will always be apart.

Copyright © confused_nutter ... [ 2004-02-21 10:03:18]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:59:30 AM AEST
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thats soooo sad :(
but i just love how you wrote it, wow is all i can say. keep it up id love to read more.
Arden

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by kissez_x0x0_hugz on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:46:50 PM AEST
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I am just like you I always express my feelings through words and u r just expressing exactly what you feel and it makes me feel that way aswell! I hope that u get back with that special person! thx for replying and giving me the opportunity to read your poems keep riting! :D
x0x0x~CaNdIe~

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:06:16 PM AEST
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Awwhh its so sad. You really are very talented, I have bookmarked you....keep writing these are good

Love Dawny x

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:26:46 PM AEST
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Excellent again. Really deep and I can feel your pain, well done.

Ali xx

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