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Array ( [sid] => 35756 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cut [time] => 2004-02-21 02:03:50 [hometext] => i wrote this last year so yea.... [bodytext] => Painful screams fill the room
As I sit and cry on the stool
Cutting my skin with a blade that now is in blood
Writing the word 'death' with blood rushing out like a flood

I know that I am not supposed to do this
But my life is bad enough as it is
I cut myself to release the pain
That through out the years i gain

I drop the blade onto the floor
I don't want to do this anymore
But yet again i reach for the blade
And cut over the marks i have made

I slip off the stool and slide down the wall
Trying to disappear or at least look small
The room is filled with a scream once more
As my tears roll down to the floor

I want to stop, I really do
But now I don't know if it will ever come true
As every long day goes by
I sit at home and I cut and I cry.

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Cut

Contributed by _Nikki_ on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 02:03:50 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Painful screams fill the room
As I sit and cry on the stool
Cutting my skin with a blade that now is in blood
Writing the word 'death' with blood rushing out like a flood

I know that I am not supposed to do this
But my life is bad enough as it is
I cut myself to release the pain
That through out the years i gain

I drop the blade onto the floor
I don't want to do this anymore
But yet again i reach for the blade
And cut over the marks i have made

I slip off the stool and slide down the wall
Trying to disappear or at least look small
The room is filled with a scream once more
As my tears roll down to the floor

I want to stop, I really do
But now I don't know if it will ever come true
As every long day goes by
I sit at home and I cut and I cry.

Copyright © _Nikki_ ... [ 2004-02-21 02:03:50]
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Re: Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 02:32:28 AM AEST
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Sad write Nikki, I hope writing this was how you really realesed some of the hurt. Cutting is always connected to crying, got to find a way to stop the crying and the cutting should follow. Good luck with this.

Re: Cut (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 05:05:20 AM AEST
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My heart is not entirely cold. This too was very touching, sad and sheds some new light on this topic. No one will understand what I mean by that, but in short, I had a set in stone idea about these kinds of feelings and actions. I had no idea some of the emotions behind these actions, so I apologize to everyone who ever wrote a piece like this that I just overlooked or rolled my eyes to. I'm Sorry.

Re: Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 06:04:35 PM AEST
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very good poem i've been there and done that so i know where ur coming from i was a cutter went to a hosptial got a little better the emotional pain willnever go away but the cutting can stop just believe and do it

Re: Cut (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 11:27:59 PM AEST
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hey, nikki, i wanted to say hi, its laura, uno from baker, right? (donno if u'll read this but whatever). i thought that ur poem was really amazing and i could really imagine what the scence looked like and it felt as if i wuz experiencing it.

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