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Array ( [sid] => 35748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => End of us [time] => 2004-02-21 00:09:44 [hometext] => I think this is what I wish I told my ex when we split. But being the nice guy I am, I never did :( Hope you all enjoy this one. I sure as heck did when I wrote it. MaJ [bodytext] => ----------___________-------------

Now it is time to end us
Before hand I have a few things to discuss
These are things you are going to hear
So look at the couch and sit right there

Watch my face while you read my lips
I am fed up with your 100 ego trips
You can never understand me, this I admit
Fate is what we made of it.

You act as if you don’t want to be on a stage for the world to see
You want to be yourself and free
When you act like the world is your disease
Yet you blew my love off like a swift summers breeze.

When you were down I always would help you through
Now I am kicking myself for even swapping spit with you
Why didn’t I recognize that everything was never fine?
So forget you and forget this bleeding heart of mine!

I am tired of your looking down on me
Remember how good your world use to be
Never again will you see those days
You ruined me for good and in too many ways

You will always stand high, when you stand on every man
Stand on your own for once, hold your own water if you can
So what are you going to do?
Will anything ever be good enough for you?

You are not by far Gods gift
And your attitude could use a little lift
You don’t even notice, you can’t even see
Your entire life is burning into obscurity

You use your love selectively
Holding in your true feelings collectively
Actions of hate reside from you, what do you gain?
Never taking responsibility for your actions, but you are the first to complain

Forget what I look like, forget what you see
Your best bet is to just unlearn me
I don’t want to even be in your worst thought
You are someone that I have already forgot

I hung on every word you said, like a baited hook
Now I can’t even stand to think of your look
I wish you could get a glimpse
The look on your face was so priceless

The fact that you think you can speak to me
The way you do bleeds me to believe
That you never took a step out of the skin
Your soul lives with-in

So be careful what you wish for with pride
You never know who has the devil locked inside
Stop acting like you are so far up
When it is only the blood of hate that fills your cup

My revelations is what you should fear
My psychotic episodes so crystalline clear
Love you again, I cannot do. Do my thoughts deceive me?
Loving you would be like watching history repeating.

Your love is now so uninviting
I am tired of only fighting
You know what you can no do
There is the door, Do let it hit you where the good lord split you!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 451 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => moderator 9 2/20.04 spelling [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
End of us

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 12:09:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



----------___________-------------

Now it is time to end us
Before hand I have a few things to discuss
These are things you are going to hear
So look at the couch and sit right there

Watch my face while you read my lips
I am fed up with your 100 ego trips
You can never understand me, this I admit
Fate is what we made of it.

You act as if you don’t want to be on a stage for the world to see
You want to be yourself and free
When you act like the world is your disease
Yet you blew my love off like a swift summers breeze.

When you were down I always would help you through
Now I am kicking myself for even swapping spit with you
Why didn’t I recognize that everything was never fine?
So forget you and forget this bleeding heart of mine!

I am tired of your looking down on me
Remember how good your world use to be
Never again will you see those days
You ruined me for good and in too many ways

You will always stand high, when you stand on every man
Stand on your own for once, hold your own water if you can
So what are you going to do?
Will anything ever be good enough for you?

You are not by far Gods gift
And your attitude could use a little lift
You don’t even notice, you can’t even see
Your entire life is burning into obscurity

You use your love selectively
Holding in your true feelings collectively
Actions of hate reside from you, what do you gain?
Never taking responsibility for your actions, but you are the first to complain

Forget what I look like, forget what you see
Your best bet is to just unlearn me
I don’t want to even be in your worst thought
You are someone that I have already forgot

I hung on every word you said, like a baited hook
Now I can’t even stand to think of your look
I wish you could get a glimpse
The look on your face was so priceless

The fact that you think you can speak to me
The way you do bleeds me to believe
That you never took a step out of the skin
Your soul lives with-in

So be careful what you wish for with pride
You never know who has the devil locked inside
Stop acting like you are so far up
When it is only the blood of hate that fills your cup

My revelations is what you should fear
My psychotic episodes so crystalline clear
Love you again, I cannot do. Do my thoughts deceive me?
Loving you would be like watching history repeating.

Your love is now so uninviting
I am tired of only fighting
You know what you can no do
There is the door, Do let it hit you where the good lord split you!




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Re: End of us (User Rating: 1 )
by antares on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 12:26:08 AM AEST
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haha i loved this poem! i can totally relate to some of it! i wish i could have gotten angry with my ex but unfortunately i didn't. i really liked this one a bunch. i wrote a poem called love: now free, also out of bitterness. some people just dont learn! great write, check out mine~antares


Re: End of us (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 01:22:22 AM AEST
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Very good.
Sure got them told!
Very good job!
luv, huggs,
emy




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