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Array ( [sid] => 35734 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A lie a day Keeps the cells away [time] => 2004-02-20 19:58:29 [hometext] => To Jillian :) [bodytext] => Flocks of cells
Stream down the vein
all coming and going
and starting from the same place
another lie i heard
another pound to my heart
another cell slow to start
a cold reaction
and a shiver down my spine
why the hell do you have to lie
it seems i dont care because im gone
ill never trust again
ill never love
if i had a reason
it wont be good enough
its never good enough
just to love you!
i may sound twisted
i may sound mad
because enough was enough
you seem like lifes not tough
well go ahead lie
make my life more rough
with all this stupid stuff [comments] => 4 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 6 [informant] => fldadn1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

A lie a day Keeps the cells away

Contributed by fldadn1 on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:58:29 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Flocks of cells
Stream down the vein
all coming and going
and starting from the same place
another lie i heard
another pound to my heart
another cell slow to start
a cold reaction
and a shiver down my spine
why the hell do you have to lie
it seems i dont care because im gone
ill never trust again
ill never love
if i had a reason
it wont be good enough
its never good enough
just to love you!
i may sound twisted
i may sound mad
because enough was enough
you seem like lifes not tough
well go ahead lie
make my life more rough
with all this stupid stuff

Copyright © fldadn1 ... [ 2004-02-20 19:58:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A lie a day Keeps the cells away (User Rating: 1 )
by Betterdorkthenu on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:10:40 PM AEST
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I like your poem. It shows that you are angry, that you've been hurt. I can relate to your poem. It shows me I am not the only one out there that has been hurt.

Re: A lie a day Keeps the cells away (User Rating: 1 )
by RochelleLloyd on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 04:11:46 AM AEST
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i've known this feeling. I like this piece.

Re: A lie a day Keeps the cells away (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 06:33:49 PM AEST
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i like this poem and i think that hurt is soo much around us that its inevitable u cant stop it...........but what u can do is decide weather u make your self hurt or not

Re: A lie a day Keeps the cells away (User Rating: 1 )
by TheNextRobertFrost on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:24:34 AM AEST
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Very powerful poem. I do somethimes feel like that and it seems like the anger is unstoppable would'nt you agree? Very well done.

Keep it up!

TB

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