Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 18:57:20 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 35722 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Love [time] => 2004-02-20 19:03:47 [hometext] => something about my poem...well...its me [bodytext] => Think of the tear falling from the eye,
Rising and swelling as we say goodbye.
Light footsteps slowly fading away
Forgotten rules, you cannot obey
From the darkness I feel your hate
My beating heart, you penetrate
My mind attacked, my soul oppressed
The innocent being, never blessed.

The lonely conscience of the forgotten soul
For each mere thought, there is always a toll
Their feelings they pour, onto the dust
To be wanted, needed, their only lust
Yet they still wander, alone in strife
The pointless existence of a meaningless life
Can nobody see? Will nobody try?
To this vicious world, they say goodbye…

She searches for her forbidden lover
But he has left, and found another
Her tears of blood, upon the floor
The figure of hate, stands at the door
This final breath, her fading pulse
The emotions inside, were truly false
Now as she approaches, the gates of hell
To the devil her soul, she is forced to sell
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 39 [informant] => confused_nutter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

My Love

Contributed by confused_nutter on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:03:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Think of the tear falling from the eye,
Rising and swelling as we say goodbye.
Light footsteps slowly fading away
Forgotten rules, you cannot obey
From the darkness I feel your hate
My beating heart, you penetrate
My mind attacked, my soul oppressed
The innocent being, never blessed.

The lonely conscience of the forgotten soul
For each mere thought, there is always a toll
Their feelings they pour, onto the dust
To be wanted, needed, their only lust
Yet they still wander, alone in strife
The pointless existence of a meaningless life
Can nobody see? Will nobody try?
To this vicious world, they say goodbye…

She searches for her forbidden lover
But he has left, and found another
Her tears of blood, upon the floor
The figure of hate, stands at the door
This final breath, her fading pulse
The emotions inside, were truly false
Now as she approaches, the gates of hell
To the devil her soul, she is forced to sell

Copyright © confused_nutter ... [ 2004-02-20 19:03:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:24:31 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

WOW!!!! awesome!! that was so good im at a loss for words. great write by a talented poet.
Arden

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 11:11:36 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

That was um very good to say the least. I can't really say much else, except it has left an impression on me, you are a very talented writer. ;)

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:42:06 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this is so damn good..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by kissez_x0x0_hugz on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:42:46 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

OMG!!! thank you for reccommending me to read this poem! It is very very well written! I don't even know what to say..UR A VERY TALENTED WRITER!!! keep it up! I think i'm going to chek out some of ur other poems for shure! why don't u try and chek mine out?!?! only if u feel up to it! awesome write:)
x0x0~CaNdIe~

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:39:48 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this poem touched something deep inside me, keep writing, your words move hearts, hugs n' love nessa

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:08:37 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I have read all your posted poems, and they just keep getting better!! This is brilliant, you are such a talented writer. Write some more quick....... lol

Love Dawny x

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:23:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow!! Are you really as young as you said in the chatroom? You are very talented, what can I say you have hidden depths, awesome!!!!

Ali xx

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com