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[sid] => 35705
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Lost View
[time] => 2004-02-20 17:46:25
[hometext] => This was the origanl, when I really couldn't see her... (repost)
[bodytext] => I am coming for you, Do you see me yet? I am soaring through an ocean of a cloud on my boat, Trying to find you, To get close to you, I only want a word, Anything beside goodbye, I feel like I am flying through the lakes, I sail my cloud for you, For the love of you, For my love of your beauty, For my love of your mind, Your company, Your warmth, Sympathy, Love, I hope it's there, The lakes have fallen upon the clouds, Making it hard to see, Can you see me yet? I can see you, See the light around you, Your beauty radiating, I see the light as I peer through the thick lake, With the telescope I see your face, Beautiful face, I hit a rock, And I'm lost on my way over, Can you see me yet? ***** Cats cannot swim, Telescope still in hand, Still focused on your beauty, I don't bother with the hole, Knowing I am going to sink, I will do soon, No swimming in the clouds, I would rather die seeing your beauty, Then die knowing I cannot get there, Die with your beauty in mind, It's at my neck, Still moving forward, Meters away, It's blocking the bottom of my lense, I grasp it tighter, Your still in my view, It's above the lense, I hold it tighter, Purple hands, Without you in sight, I let out my breath, To die in the clouds. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Asatru [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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