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Thrashed upon the treacherous sea
Poseidon exhausts his raging fury
White-whipped ominous waves
Hurls the hopeless vessel to its grave

Pandora’s Box’s Hope expelling
Rags clutch to the scraggy being
Blistered, pruned hands forsake
Salt-soaked eyelids willingly flake

Melodious chorus engulfs the senses
Beams of pure golden light dispenses
Ensnared within the gossamer web of song
A lone mind encased in the labyrinth throng

The heavenly echoes awaken restless souls
Imprisons weariness, throbbing aches and it dulls
Feeling weightless as down-feather clouds
Drift in absolute bliss as the fog enshrouds

Sunbeams glare through flimsy eyelids
The venture ending on a desolate island
Expanse of cerulean, where once clouds porous
Voices still resounding of your savior, the angel’s chorus
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Angel's Storm

Contributed by Lainda on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:10:47 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Angel’s Storm

Thrashed upon the treacherous sea
Poseidon exhausts his raging fury
White-whipped ominous waves
Hurls the hopeless vessel to its grave

Pandora’s Box’s Hope expelling
Rags clutch to the scraggy being
Blistered, pruned hands forsake
Salt-soaked eyelids willingly flake

Melodious chorus engulfs the senses
Beams of pure golden light dispenses
Ensnared within the gossamer web of song
A lone mind encased in the labyrinth throng

The heavenly echoes awaken restless souls
Imprisons weariness, throbbing aches and it dulls
Feeling weightless as down-feather clouds
Drift in absolute bliss as the fog enshrouds

Sunbeams glare through flimsy eyelids
The venture ending on a desolate island
Expanse of cerulean, where once clouds porous
Voices still resounding of your savior, the angel’s chorus

Copyright Â© Lainda ... [ 2004-02-20 17:10:47]
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Re: Angel's Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:41:04 PM AEST
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Beautiful, good job.i look forward to more.
Arden

Re: Angel's Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:46:34 PM AEST
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Poetry at its best! I think this is the first poem I have read by you and I can't wait for more. Kie

Re: Angel's Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:51:00 PM AEST
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awesome - just awesome, I've nothing more to say, just a good poem.

Re: Angel's Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:36:32 PM AEST
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After your comment on my poem 'Raptured Dreams' i just had to look at your work, and i must say i am so glad i did because this is unimaginable, i was beginning to feel just a little to wordy during the middle stanzas but then it just flew away and reached an amazing level of brilliance that i could only dream touching.

Truely a timeless piece that will be never be forgotten through the ages

Luke

Re: Angel's Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:40:38 AM AEST
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It's great to read this.. keep up the good job.. I love this

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