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Array ( [sid] => 35690 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My own little hell. [time] => 2004-02-20 16:10:09 [hometext] => Hey shadow, how is this for a dark poem? tell me what you think! [bodytext] => my own little hell,
killing me slowly,
devouring me into itself,
with no escape,
only to leave me alone,
with no one but myself,
sanity leaves,
and so does all life,
darkness takes over,
i am its slave,
to take life away,
and share my own little hell,
everyone must follow,
the evil is too strong,
much too strong,
and not even god himself,
can resist its calling,
and the heaven that once was there,
is not now,
it was devoured,
by my own little hell,
only to come to find,
that it was never there,
and all of gods followers,
never really existed,
and that i was the only god,
but in the form of the devil,
who says that he can't be a she,
in her own little hell.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 13 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My own little hell.

Contributed by SAT on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

my own little hell,
killing me slowly,
devouring me into itself,
with no escape,
only to leave me alone,
with no one but myself,
sanity leaves,
and so does all life,
darkness takes over,
i am its slave,
to take life away,
and share my own little hell,
everyone must follow,
the evil is too strong,
much too strong,
and not even god himself,
can resist its calling,
and the heaven that once was there,
is not now,
it was devoured,
by my own little hell,
only to come to find,
that it was never there,
and all of gods followers,
never really existed,
and that i was the only god,
but in the form of the devil,
who says that he can't be a she,
in her own little hell.

Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-02-20 16:10:09]
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Re: My own little hell. (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:24:00 PM AEST
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This is a fabulous poem. Dark & deep and I have had some of the same thoughts at times. You placed them into poetic form and this is my favorite by you. Awesome, awesome, awesome! Kie

Re: My own little hell. (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:03:34 PM AEST
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i like your poem very descriptive and emotional

Re: My own little hell. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 02:26:14 PM AEST
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I may not be a member here, but i read many
dark and suicide poems, and this one i can really relate to-really nicely done. keep writing-i'd love to read more.

Re: My own little hell. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 02:27:45 PM AEST
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I may not be a member here, but i read many
dark and suicide poems, and this one i can really relate to-really nicely done. keep writing-i'd love to read more.

Re: My own little hell. (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:44:49 PM AEST
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Pretty twisted.... but REALLY good. I feel that way sometimes. Hope to read more from you! Keep it up!

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