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I don't know just what to do
when I feel so blue.
I always used to think of you;
the love I thought was true.

I used to think I'd see the sun,
and someday, we would have such fun.
I knew our time had just begun,
and now, it seems like we are done.

I still just don't know why
you like to hear me cry.
Like the clouds that fill the sky,
my love for you will never die.

Soon you will come back for me,
and I will tell you what I see.
I see a man so scared and weak
who can't give me the love I seek.

You are the only man I love
sent to me from up above.
Someday soon, I know you'll see
the one you truly love is me.

`*`

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Eternity

Contributed by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:09:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I don't know just what to do
when I feel so blue.
I always used to think of you;
the love I thought was true.

I used to think I'd see the sun,
and someday, we would have such fun.
I knew our time had just begun,
and now, it seems like we are done.

I still just don't know why
you like to hear me cry.
Like the clouds that fill the sky,
my love for you will never die.

Soon you will come back for me,
and I will tell you what I see.
I see a man so scared and weak
who can't give me the love I seek.

You are the only man I love
sent to me from up above.
Someday soon, I know you'll see
the one you truly love is me.

`*`

Copyright © Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau ... [ 2004-02-20 14:09:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by antares on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:36:50 PM AEST
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i really loved this poem! i am living this right now and can relate one hundred percent. i feel your pain..check out some of my poems and tell me what u think. i like yours a lot!~antares

Re: Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:14:43 PM AEST
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Well said! Kie

Re: Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:56:18 PM AEST
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true, eternity is a long time, but so is life. Everyone says it's so short when yet it's up to us how long we last. Good write.

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