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Array ( [sid] => 35620 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Something Better [time] => 2004-02-19 23:05:41 [hometext] => I can hope and dream. I can wish and pray. [bodytext] => Can you feel me
laying next to you.
Softly kissing every
curve of your body.
Touching and massaging
Worshipping you my goddess.
Pull me up to your
delicate soft lips.
Praying to heaven
as this kiss an eternity lasts
and this love so pure.
Aching inside to feel you near.
I toss and turn when away.
For now though you're here.
Below and above
I can feel you all around.
Relaxed and safe
smiling and laughing
joking while in you.
All the walks we take
and all the talks we have
always real never fake.
Sadly I wake but smile
wishing for just this
praying and hoping
that soon we will meet.
Then my need will be gone
and my life so complete


Raven's Sin [comments] => 8 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Something Better

Contributed by Cobalt on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:05:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Can you feel me
laying next to you.
Softly kissing every
curve of your body.
Touching and massaging
Worshipping you my goddess.
Pull me up to your
delicate soft lips.
Praying to heaven
as this kiss an eternity lasts
and this love so pure.
Aching inside to feel you near.
I toss and turn when away.
For now though you're here.
Below and above
I can feel you all around.
Relaxed and safe
smiling and laughing
joking while in you.
All the walks we take
and all the talks we have
always real never fake.
Sadly I wake but smile
wishing for just this
praying and hoping
that soon we will meet.
Then my need will be gone
and my life so complete


Raven's Sin




Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-02-19 23:05:41]
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Re: Something Better (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:36:36 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes.
I think this is the best poem I have read of yours to date. ((5)) and then some... Kie


Re: Something Better (User Rating: 1 )
by fldadn1 on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:49:00 PM AEST
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Keep being patient man, I'm waiting myself haha. Great poem looking foward to many more.


Re: Something Better (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:11:17 AM AEST
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very pretty...


Re: Something Better (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:28:06 AM AEST
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Lawed have mercy you got fire in yours fingertips!
This one jus sears straite to the heart
like cupids dart........I hear every vibe in this one.....
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Something Better (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:19:40 AM AEST
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this is a very beautiful write.. I really enjoyed this one.. your so talented.. I like everything you write.. this was an awesome right
great job!!

peace

JENNA


Re: Something Better (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:25:51 AM AEST
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Passionate spirit with beautiful expression.. venkat


Re: Something Better (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:04:16 PM AEST
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wow I'm amazed how u can write about something so dark and then your next poem is so beautiful. Kudos to you man.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Something Better (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:21:00 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful Jeff !! You're getting damn good at this romantic writing ;o)

Very well done

Larry




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