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Array ( [sid] => 35571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Today And The Next Day [time] => 2004-02-19 17:04:40 [hometext] => I wrote a poem called today, now, this is what happened that day and the next. [bodytext] => Today was a great day,
Today I saw her beautiful face,

Today was a great day,
Today we talked like no one else was there,

Today was a great day,
Today she wrote me a note,

Today was a great day,
Today she told me she liked me,

Today was a great day,
Today I wrote her a poem,

Today was a great day,
Today I asked her out,

Today was a bad day,
Today she said no,

Today was a bad day,
Today I didn't talk,

Today was a bad day,
Today I made my friends depressed,

Today was a bad day,
Today she told me maybe later,

Today was a bad day,
Today she just couldn't tell me never,

Today was a horrible day,
Today she started going out with my friend,

Today was alright,
Today is the last day I will allow myself to see.

Today was a great day,
Today I woke up,

Today was a great day,
I decided to let myself see,

Today was a great day,
It was much like the last,

Today was a great day,
I realize I’m still breathing,

Today was a great day,
I saw her a lot,

Today was a great day,
She’s still dating my friend,

Today was a great day,
They’re happy as can be,

Today was a great day,
I met someone new,

Today was a great day,
I like someone else,

Today was a great day,
I realize life is a gift,

Today was a great day,
I realized death shall not take me,

Today was a great day,
I now know something new,

Today was a great day,
I realized my life is mine,

Today was a great day,
I know the meaning to my life,

Today was a great day,
I know what I am,

Today was a great day,
I know what I’m going to be,

Today was a great day,
I know I’ll breathe till I say,

Today was a great day,
I realized happiness is not only mine,

Today was a great day,
Happiness is everyone’s

Today was the best day,
Today she shall not claim my soul.
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Today And The Next Day

Contributed by Asatru on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:04:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Today was a great day,
Today I saw her beautiful face,

Today was a great day,
Today we talked like no one else was there,

Today was a great day,
Today she wrote me a note,

Today was a great day,
Today she told me she liked me,

Today was a great day,
Today I wrote her a poem,

Today was a great day,
Today I asked her out,

Today was a bad day,
Today she said no,

Today was a bad day,
Today I didn't talk,

Today was a bad day,
Today I made my friends depressed,

Today was a bad day,
Today she told me maybe later,

Today was a bad day,
Today she just couldn't tell me never,

Today was a horrible day,
Today she started going out with my friend,

Today was alright,
Today is the last day I will allow myself to see.

Today was a great day,
Today I woke up,

Today was a great day,
I decided to let myself see,

Today was a great day,
It was much like the last,

Today was a great day,
I realize I’m still breathing,

Today was a great day,
I saw her a lot,

Today was a great day,
She’s still dating my friend,

Today was a great day,
They’re happy as can be,

Today was a great day,
I met someone new,

Today was a great day,
I like someone else,

Today was a great day,
I realize life is a gift,

Today was a great day,
I realized death shall not take me,

Today was a great day,
I now know something new,

Today was a great day,
I realized my life is mine,

Today was a great day,
I know the meaning to my life,

Today was a great day,
I know what I am,

Today was a great day,
I know what I’m going to be,

Today was a great day,
I know I’ll breathe till I say,

Today was a great day,
I realized happiness is not only mine,

Today was a great day,
Happiness is everyone’s

Today was the best day,
Today she shall not claim my soul.




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Re: Today And The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:09:24 PM AEST
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today... today... TODAY!! OKAY!! lol, this was cute, the repitition works!
~Remy~


Re: Today And The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:01:09 PM AEST
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Good write keep those great days going, it will work out for the best. I think you might like one of mine bye Wes...




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