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Array ( [sid] => 35563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losing You Now [time] => 2004-02-19 15:32:36 [hometext] => My girlfriend just got put in the hospital, and she may not make it. [bodytext] => I'm trying to be there with you,
You're in the hospital 60 miles away.
I'm trying to find a way to you,
But it's not an easy thing to do.
Seems nobody's going that way,
I'm going against the flow.
I know you may not make it,
So right now I just want you to know
That I love you,
And right now I feel like I'm losing you.
Please, baby, don't let go.
Live for me, or let me exchange my life
For yours.
You know if I could I will.
I'd die for you to live,
But without you to be there for me,
I don't know if I could.
Please don't let me lose you,
Don't die on me.
Now I feel like I'm losing you.
I'm so scared that I'm losing you. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Solmyr1404 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Losing You Now

Contributed by Solmyr1404 on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:32:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I'm trying to be there with you,
You're in the hospital 60 miles away.
I'm trying to find a way to you,
But it's not an easy thing to do.
Seems nobody's going that way,
I'm going against the flow.
I know you may not make it,
So right now I just want you to know
That I love you,
And right now I feel like I'm losing you.
Please, baby, don't let go.
Live for me, or let me exchange my life
For yours.
You know if I could I will.
I'd die for you to live,
But without you to be there for me,
I don't know if I could.
Please don't let me lose you,
Don't die on me.
Now I feel like I'm losing you.
I'm so scared that I'm losing you.

Copyright © Solmyr1404 ... [ 2004-02-19 15:32:36]
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Re: Losing You Now (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:38:12 PM AEST
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I wish there was something I could do Solmyr......but I can't

Re: Losing You Now (User Rating: 1 )
by SAT on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:18:41 PM AEST
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im so sorry. i hope that she does make it, because i dont know what we'd all do without your touching words. if i can help in any way, let me know. ill say a prayer for the both of you. again, sorry. :'(

Re: Losing You Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:31:50 PM AEST
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This is a good poem... and I'm really sorry about your girlfriend, hopes she makes it.

Re: Losing You Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:38:26 PM AEST
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Are you in Missouri maybe I can give you a ride to the hospital? Let me know, oh I hope she is ok. bye Wes...

Re: Losing You Now (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:03:21 AM AEST
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The is well captured in poetic form.. you are good at this, Solmy... hei whenever u get to my page comment and vote my poems

Re: Losing You Now (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:04:10 PM AEST
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this is a very deep heartfelt poem, and i pray all is well with her..love is a powerful thing and it may be just the thing that pulls her through...you are not without prayers...slr

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