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Array ( [sid] => 35537 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Dreaming Sweet Dreams~ [time] => 2004-02-19 12:23:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I had a dream the other day,
So perfect in every way,
My arms wrapped around you,
Holding you tightly,
But touching you softly,
Feeling the security of being with you,
And you alone,
Having no others in the room,
Except that blindfolded angel,
Who goes by Cupid,
Watching what he had done,
I sat there smiling,
Loving having you in my arms,
Our room had no light,
Thought you could see the clouds clearing overhead,
And nothing but the purity of the sun hit us then,
Distracted by none,
I just held my Amulet,
In a subliminal bliss,
Being completely happy,
Though I had to awake at that time,
And when I did I could only frown,
Knowing of my dream,
Being nothing more than that,
Because every time I take you home,
I coward out of asking you this question,
I just look in your eyes,
Lost because I can’t tell,
What you are feeling,
And I dream my dream again,
Is this some sign,
Or some deception,
I will not know until I ask,
So here is my question,
Will you let my dream be real,
Can we make it go on,
I’m asking can we walk,
Hand in hand,
Can we talk,
With you in my arms,
Can we make my dream,
No longer be a dream?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Asatru [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

~Dreaming Sweet Dreams~

Contributed by Asatru on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I had a dream the other day,
So perfect in every way,
My arms wrapped around you,
Holding you tightly,
But touching you softly,
Feeling the security of being with you,
And you alone,
Having no others in the room,
Except that blindfolded angel,
Who goes by Cupid,
Watching what he had done,
I sat there smiling,
Loving having you in my arms,
Our room had no light,
Thought you could see the clouds clearing overhead,
And nothing but the purity of the sun hit us then,
Distracted by none,
I just held my Amulet,
In a subliminal bliss,
Being completely happy,
Though I had to awake at that time,
And when I did I could only frown,
Knowing of my dream,
Being nothing more than that,
Because every time I take you home,
I coward out of asking you this question,
I just look in your eyes,
Lost because I can’t tell,
What you are feeling,
And I dream my dream again,
Is this some sign,
Or some deception,
I will not know until I ask,
So here is my question,
Will you let my dream be real,
Can we make it go on,
I’m asking can we walk,
Hand in hand,
Can we talk,
With you in my arms,
Can we make my dream,
No longer be a dream?

Copyright Â© Asatru ... [ 2004-02-19 12:23:20]
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Re: ~Dreaming Sweet Dreams~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:04:59 PM AEST
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Dream a good dream and then act upon it, you'll get somewhere with that I'm sure!!
~Remy~

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