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Array ( [sid] => 35507 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding Cries [time] => 2004-02-19 00:43:05 [hometext] => * I honestly don't remember writing this, but i guess thats not the point * [bodytext] => My wrists are bleeding
I thought I conquered this,
But the demon still has me
I'm losing self-control,
And I'm screaming for you to kill me
Tears foaming downward
All muddied and empty

All that matters isn't whats foremost
Trying to find some escape
Entranced with my scars and feeling pain
Enchanted with dying
And I'm feeling the fear
Oh, please kill me
Or burn away the *****

Crying, alone on this mountain
Craving the solitude, but despising it
I'm that much closer to you,
But still so far away
Trapped in this pit
Foaming, ranting, raving,
Cutting, bleeding, dying,
But freedom is beyond me
And my mind can't grasp peace
As it slips from my bloodied hands [comments] => 8 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Bleeding Cries

Contributed by bobotheclown on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:43:05 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My wrists are bleeding
I thought I conquered this,
But the demon still has me
I'm losing self-control,
And I'm screaming for you to kill me
Tears foaming downward
All muddied and empty

All that matters isn't whats foremost
Trying to find some escape
Entranced with my scars and feeling pain
Enchanted with dying
And I'm feeling the fear
Oh, please kill me
Or burn away the *****

Crying, alone on this mountain
Craving the solitude, but despising it
I'm that much closer to you,
But still so far away
Trapped in this pit
Foaming, ranting, raving,
Cutting, bleeding, dying,
But freedom is beyond me
And my mind can't grasp peace
As it slips from my bloodied hands

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2004-02-19 00:43:05]
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Re: Bleeding Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 12:53:18 AM AEST
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It is a hard demon to fight.....but i hope u win your battle. Bobo your work is always great and this is also great! Keep up the good work!

Re: Bleeding Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:45:08 AM AEST
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hey old friend... what's new? nice piece, glad you found it in that dark mind of yours...the despair here is most salient to me, seems you're going in circles? hope to here from you soon, sorry i'm not around much anymore. posted a new one myself... check it... peace

Re: Bleeding Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:13:43 AM AEST
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Hey Joel,
Thank you for writing this, even if you don't remember that part. You've said what I've been trying to say for the last.. I don't know how long...I can relate immensely right now..Great write..

_-{Psych}-_

Re: Bleeding Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:21:24 PM AEST
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This i LOVE.. the last two lines are great.. dammit its all great..
char x_x_x

Re: Bleeding Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:55:41 PM AEST
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Joel u gotta teach me how to write lyke dis...lol I'm no jealous I just wuv how u write its soo deep,dark and moving... I L O V E I T!!!

always
Care

Re: Bleeding Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:17:35 AM AEST
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Perfect Joel. I won't type much because of my Carpal Tunnel Syndrome, but I will let you know how much I can relate to this poem. Amazing.

Stacey

Re: Bleeding Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:41:41 PM AEST
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Bobo, what have ya been up to dear friend? This is a great write. When are you going to start posting more? I enjoy reading your writes. *S* Cynthia

Re: Bleeding Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:56:05 PM AEST
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Wonderful piece. It definetely darkens my mind. I enjoyed reading your poems very much joel. They somehow remind me of the past I left behind only viewed in a different perspective. I hope you always continue to amaze me as you are now.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

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