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Array ( [sid] => 35391 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I am done with you, or so it seems. [time] => 2004-02-18 02:24:06 [hometext] => Pain, Lies, Seclusion, led to my demise. I seen all the hate behind her eyes. I am done with her now. So it seems. I think women are out to get me. :( Hope you all enjoy this one. MaJ [bodytext] => ---------_________-----------

The lies caused me sadness
This truth is driving me to madness
A broken heart created unjustly
A broken mind inside the insanity

I climbed inside of me
To escape the sanity
Confusions create normality
Seismic pains bring me to my creativity

I hide inside myself for hours
No one can hurt me with their black flowers
This refuge I created is my way to escape
I live for your love, my love lives for your hate

Am I imagining all of these lies?
I dream of truth in disguise
Inside insanity I found truth and what a surprise
The truth was in the lies behind your eyes

I feel as if by you I was crucified
Not asked for, but a forced suicide
A million tears from a single cry
I think about you, and a million times I die

You took everything from me
Not you or me, it was not meant to be
This was not the ending I wished to receive
I hope my demise coincides with your fearless dreams

I stand here broken before you
Loved but no one, hate by more then a few
My heart has nothing left to say
I stand before you, all that is left of yesterday.

Time is giving to you, it cannot be borrowed
My love is as ancient as the past, as modern as the tomorrow
I hope I wretch with havoc in all your dreams
I done with you, well so it seems...
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I am done with you, or so it seems.

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 02:24:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



---------_________-----------

The lies caused me sadness
This truth is driving me to madness
A broken heart created unjustly
A broken mind inside the insanity

I climbed inside of me
To escape the sanity
Confusions create normality
Seismic pains bring me to my creativity

I hide inside myself for hours
No one can hurt me with their black flowers
This refuge I created is my way to escape
I live for your love, my love lives for your hate

Am I imagining all of these lies?
I dream of truth in disguise
Inside insanity I found truth and what a surprise
The truth was in the lies behind your eyes

I feel as if by you I was crucified
Not asked for, but a forced suicide
A million tears from a single cry
I think about you, and a million times I die

You took everything from me
Not you or me, it was not meant to be
This was not the ending I wished to receive
I hope my demise coincides with your fearless dreams

I stand here broken before you
Loved but no one, hate by more then a few
My heart has nothing left to say
I stand before you, all that is left of yesterday.

Time is giving to you, it cannot be borrowed
My love is as ancient as the past, as modern as the tomorrow
I hope I wretch with havoc in all your dreams
I done with you, well so it seems...




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Re: I am done with you, or so it seems. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 05:38:53 AM AEST
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I hear every word u say.
Very creative write.
Luv the whole thing but I done with you, well so it seems.........Been there, done that but I couldn't handle the dishonesty.....time will heal wounds.
The day I woke up and realized I was healed from my last ex was a glorious day!
luv, huggs,
emy




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