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Love
Contributed by
tatortot
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:35:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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how far apart i feel from you,
how lonely life does seem.
now that your gone i wonder,
what exactly does love mean?
without you i feel lonely,
without you i feel lost.
without you life seems different,
without you love is lost.
i loved the way you smiled,
whenever i was near.
i loved the way you hugged me,
and held me close and dear.
but what i loved the most of all,
was the way you loved me so,
and the way i felt so warm and safe,
whenever you were close.
im sorry that its over,
but so great a time we had.
ill miss the way it was with you,
ill miss you oh, so bad.
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2004-02-17 22:35:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:43:00 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful, very very lovely poem. keep it up ill be on the look out for more of your work from now on.
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:04:04 AM AEST (User
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Well u certainly could have fooled me 'cause this is written like a pro!
You've found your knack.
Keep up the good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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