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what do you want from me?

Contributed by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:24:20 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



i feel so confused,
lost inside my own head,
feeling so lost on the inside,
tell me...should i forgive and forget?
my head will explode from the impact,
the thought of what is wrong,
im feeling as if im losing myself,
but ive been lost all along.
i dont want you to make me feel this way,
with all your hurt and your lies,
im living inside a nightmare,
i want to see the sky,
i want to be me again,
not a ghost of my former self,
im tired of feeling like this inside,
but i cant rest without your help
so please just tell me what you want,
and go home, leave me be,
im sick of waiting here for you,
when you wont do the same for me,
i want you to understand why i hurt,
from what youve done to me,
and i need the answer now,
or this is goodbye from me.


have a nice life.......




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Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:32:59 PM AEST
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Hidden messages come out in your words, but for what you've written: it's good!
~Remy~


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:33:05 PM AEST
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you can feel the emotions in this one... I hope your plea is answered


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:45:44 PM AEST
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Yeah, I know the feeling. Does this crap ever end? I hope it does for you.
Stitch


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 06:49:55 PM AEST
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There are two things I always say in regards to life and love...
do what you feel, what your heart tells you to do...

unless it is hurting you

those are the times when you need to be deductive, to think, these are the good things, and these are the bad things... if the bad things outweigh the good things, and you cant work them out, you need to do what you have to do to make yourself feel good. because life was never meant for pain... it was meant to teach you how to deal with it.

so if you can step outside yourself and see that no matter how much you may want to hold on and/or hope, (not saying this is the case, but if it is) if it is more detrimental than benificial to you, then you need to take pro active action...
if you can do this then you will be able to overcome any emotional problem youever have. it is a unique balance between your brain and your heart.

pm me if you wanna talk about it... ive been through lots of ***** myself.

cheers,
C+


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:30:04 PM AEST
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I feel your pain through your poetry. It is a way to let all kinds of feelings out. Sad,happy,love,anything. I hope things turn out for the best for you. Read one of mine please. Wes...


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:55:29 PM AEST
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so emotional and full of pain. Do what is the right thing for you and your happens.Some people suck the air from your lungs and as I put it draw from your healthy life flow. In order to be happy you must have happy loving people near you.
michelle


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 08:07:32 PM AEST
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u wrote down in words what i feel inside everyday. i just can never get it out. i know ur pain, the questions never end. they just don't go away. were u hurt in the past? i was. pm me if u want to talk about it. i luv the write. it shows me with every line.


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:24:52 PM AEST
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you are strong and in ur peoms u show alot of emotion....ur writes r deep..glad u shared this..hope everything gets better!
luv always


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by antares on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:06:20 PM AEST
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i think u have captured very well a situation that a lot of people go through. i am one of those people and would like to thank you for ur poem. i have been lost trying to figure out what i feel and what needs to be done and you have helped me a lot. thanks again and keep writing! i hope your poem can help you as much as it helps me.


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:38:27 PM AEST
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I was in this exact situation for many years.And I do mean many!!! I finally kicked myself in the *ss and moved on and out! Believe it or not, happiness had been WAITING for me to grab it all along. It's the best thing I've ever done! It may not work for everyone, but it did for me! Loved your expression!
Angel always...godspeed...joni


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:03:02 PM AEST
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The essence of frustration, anger and sadness written so clear. Your pain directed this write and you produced an amazing write of the sorrow you are going through. I hope you pull through.


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:55:21 PM AEST
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I loved this poem it was very well written and I could feel your pain dripping from it. I have been through some of the same things that u describe and I could feel myself empathizing with you... You must realize that u can't fight on your own no matter how strong u may think u are u need friends to help keep u balanced and on an even keel. PM me or my sensitivesoabused. We've both been through a lot of crap. Once again a great poem.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: what do you want from me? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:57:01 PM AEST
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that was supposed to be my buddy sensitivesoabused...

Bobo (Joel)




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