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Array ( [sid] => 35304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => uncanny feel [time] => 2004-02-17 09:55:28 [hometext] => This says about city people n their artificial life n so their agonies….. [bodytext] => Stormy night , dark sky
Forbidden paths , nowhere to go.
Restlessness within , blankness without,
Thither sadness , hither cloud.

Treading along life’s road ,
I stop ,I reflect for awhile.
Tired , grumpy is what I contain ,
No balance or serenity to maintain.

I guff , I guffaw
My shallowness I don’t comprehend somehow.
Din around but silence within ,
Drooping I sit and gape holding my gin.

Was it pride?was it greed?
To my downfall how did I speed?
Maddening rush , deafening sound
Made up faces all around.

You I believe or him I disown ,
He is other but you were my own .
Helplessly I try to stand ,yet I drown
There is sunshine yet in darkness I am found.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 25 [informant] => bhavnas [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

uncanny feel

Contributed by bhavnas on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 09:55:28 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Stormy night , dark sky
Forbidden paths , nowhere to go.
Restlessness within , blankness without,
Thither sadness , hither cloud.

Treading along life’s road ,
I stop ,I reflect for awhile.
Tired , grumpy is what I contain ,
No balance or serenity to maintain.

I guff , I guffaw
My shallowness I don’t comprehend somehow.
Din around but silence within ,
Drooping I sit and gape holding my gin.

Was it pride?was it greed?
To my downfall how did I speed?
Maddening rush , deafening sound
Made up faces all around.

You I believe or him I disown ,
He is other but you were my own .
Helplessly I try to stand ,yet I drown
There is sunshine yet in darkness I am found.

Copyright © bhavnas ... [ 2004-02-17 09:55:28]
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Re: uncanny feel (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 01:54:17 PM AEST
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very refreshing write, this is why i moved to the country lol, but i reminese about my life in the city... hugs n' love nessa

Re: uncanny feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:49:35 PM AEST
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I can relate so well to this piece. My 30 year career left me with no time to go inside and find myself. No peace, no serenity. As soon as I retired I moved out to the country and life is now so beautiful and serene. I can actually enjoy each day and not ever look at a clock. Yes, we do get too caught up in our lives sometimes to really live and capture life.

Rainbows,
Rita

Re: uncanny feel (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:57:11 AM AEST
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Welldone my friend..there is nice effect in the poem.. venkat

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