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Array ( [sid] => 35259 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dying... [time] => 2004-02-16 23:53:20 [hometext] => this is just something i would want me friends and family to know if i commited suicide... (i'm new at poetry, so this isnt the greatest writing, but its from the heart) [bodytext] => as i lay here and think about death
the smell of sleeping pills is on my breath
soon enough i'll drift away
and not have to deal with any pain
but as i wait for my time to come
i think of my friends and all the fun
i'm so sorry to leave you all like this
i was about to slit my wrists
at least this way is slow and peaceful
i'm so sorry for being to mean and deceitful
ok, my eyes are closing now
there is no more time for me to frown
and now i'm in a happier place
there's nothing bad left to face
please be happy that i am now
i wish i could be there to show you how
someday we'll be together again
but please live your best until then... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xxvirginsuicidexx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
dying...

Contributed by xxvirginsuicidexx on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 11:53:20 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



as i lay here and think about death
the smell of sleeping pills is on my breath
soon enough i'll drift away
and not have to deal with any pain
but as i wait for my time to come
i think of my friends and all the fun
i'm so sorry to leave you all like this
i was about to slit my wrists
at least this way is slow and peaceful
i'm so sorry for being to mean and deceitful
ok, my eyes are closing now
there is no more time for me to frown
and now i'm in a happier place
there's nothing bad left to face
please be happy that i am now
i wish i could be there to show you how
someday we'll be together again
but please live your best until then...




Copyright © xxvirginsuicidexx ... [ 2004-02-16 23:53:20]
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Re: dying... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 01:41:16 AM AEST
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this iz a gr8 poem!!!!!!!! luv it. keep writing!!!!!


Re: dying... (User Rating: 1 )
by Arius-Inues on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 10:14:31 PM AEST
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I know how you feel! I thought that it is an exelent poem! Keep wrighting and it dosent matter if your new at this stuff or not but a poem is a poem and you have done us all proud!




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