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Array ( [sid] => 35251 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The war in my heart [time] => 2004-02-16 22:58:47 [hometext] => Comment away. Thats all i can say to this [bodytext] => The shadows march row by row
Towards the land of sunsets glow
Their black armor bone of night
Shows the depth of the deeming spite

The bright light comes to sight
Burning threw the evil night
Row by row the armies march
Their dear blood will the ground so parched

The war begins shadow and light
The metal clangs and the swords bite
Thousands of souls lost and dead
This gentle field becomes the bed

Endless numbers march on and fight
On threw dusk and threw the night
The light of shines crimson red
Honor to the fallen dead

This sad war will not soon end
No sympathy can I lend
The land they fight for is my own
This gentle soul I call home
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The war in my heart

Contributed by Shadow on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 10:58:47 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The shadows march row by row
Towards the land of sunsets glow
Their black armor bone of night
Shows the depth of the deeming spite

The bright light comes to sight
Burning threw the evil night
Row by row the armies march
Their dear blood will the ground so parched

The war begins shadow and light
The metal clangs and the swords bite
Thousands of souls lost and dead
This gentle field becomes the bed

Endless numbers march on and fight
On threw dusk and threw the night
The light of shines crimson red
Honor to the fallen dead

This sad war will not soon end
No sympathy can I lend
The land they fight for is my own
This gentle soul I call home

Copyright © Shadow ... [ 2004-02-16 22:58:47]
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Re: The war in my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 10:45:48 PM AEST
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The feeling here is powerful. Never surrender yourself to the armies of destructive evil. Strength comes from within. We all have it. Sometimes we just have to look hard to find it within ourselves.

Rita

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