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Array ( [sid] => 35241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Playing God [time] => 2004-02-16 20:49:11 [hometext] => to the friends who went and told that teacher. although i dont feel this way now, its what was running through my head the day they told the teacher. [bodytext] => How is this showing me you care?
How is this showing your love?
How is this going to save me?
Who gave you the power to play God in my life.
You don’t know what you’ve done.
You cant see how much this hurts.
You cant understand why im so upset.
It hurts because I trusted you,
Talked to you when I was down.
You knew my deepest deep,
And my darkest dark.
And you took advantage of it.
You shared it.
Now im living my worst nightmare.
Living in my personal hell.
How am I supposed to trust you now?
How am I supposed to feel loved?
I feel like you ripped my heart out,
And handed it to a stranger,
Just waiting for me to bleed.
God this hurts so much,
I feel so betrayed.
So empty.
So numb.
I want to cry so much.
I cant though.
I cant even cry my way anymore.
You’ve taken that from me.
You’ve taken everything away.
Left me here naked,
Everything is stripped away,
Alone,
And afraid.
I hate you so much…
I wish this had never happened.
I wish you weren’t so stupid….
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 6 [informant] => nightrider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Playing God

Contributed by nightrider on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:49:11 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

How is this showing me you care?
How is this showing your love?
How is this going to save me?
Who gave you the power to play God in my life.
You don’t know what you’ve done.
You cant see how much this hurts.
You cant understand why im so upset.
It hurts because I trusted you,
Talked to you when I was down.
You knew my deepest deep,
And my darkest dark.
And you took advantage of it.
You shared it.
Now im living my worst nightmare.
Living in my personal hell.
How am I supposed to trust you now?
How am I supposed to feel loved?
I feel like you ripped my heart out,
And handed it to a stranger,
Just waiting for me to bleed.
God this hurts so much,
I feel so betrayed.
So empty.
So numb.
I want to cry so much.
I cant though.
I cant even cry my way anymore.
You’ve taken that from me.
You’ve taken everything away.
Left me here naked,
Everything is stripped away,
Alone,
And afraid.
I hate you so much…
I wish this had never happened.
I wish you weren’t so stupid….

Copyright Â© nightrider ... [ 2004-02-16 20:49:11]
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Re: Playing God (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 11:07:27 PM AEST
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Written with so much emotion...well done.. I'm sure they did it because they cared..... Hope you are doing better.
Hugs
Jenni

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