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[title] => Women
[time] => 2002-09-08 06:49:11
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[bodytext] => Women deserve their plight
They are too stupid to see whats right
they gripe about men treating them like slaves
But no one appreciates all the love that I gave
Women deserve their plight
Only because they wish to stay with him each night
why don't you forget the man who did this to you
get someone better ,find some one new
Women derserve their sorrow
Don't think about him tonight or tomorrow
he treats you like dirt, but you don't understand
you think its ok because hes a man
women derserve their sadness
You are under the spell of his hollow kiss
you enter his car and you go for a "ride"
but the things that he'll do it hurts you inside
Women deserve their circumstance
I would treat you better but you don't give me the chance
I would try to take you suffering away
I would try every night and day
Woman please let me try
I promise not to make you cry
Things might be better then
Because I'm not like them
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Women
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NotBagheadX
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Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 06:49:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Women deserve their plight
They are too stupid to see whats right
they gripe about men treating them like slaves
But no one appreciates all the love that I gave
Women deserve their plight
Only because they wish to stay with him each night
why don't you forget the man who did this to you
get someone better ,find some one new
Women derserve their sorrow
Don't think about him tonight or tomorrow
he treats you like dirt, but you don't understand
you think its ok because hes a man
women derserve their sadness
You are under the spell of his hollow kiss
you enter his car and you go for a "ride"
but the things that he'll do it hurts you inside
Women deserve their circumstance
I would treat you better but you don't give me the chance
I would try to take you suffering away
I would try every night and day
Woman please let me try
I promise not to make you cry
Things might be better then
Because I'm not like them
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Re: Women
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 06:53:25 AM AEST
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| First off no woman deserves her plight! No one deserves to put up with crap or abuse man or woman. I am glad to hear that you are not like the rest. But please don't promise somthing to someone that you can't keep! Like promising not to make someone cry....all real love involves some hurt. well, I guess i can step down off this box! |
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Re: Women
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by Clarity on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 10:26:16 PM AEST
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| i have to say i agree. i have yet to meet a woman who says she liked being beat to hell by her husband/boyfriend/father or whatever other male figure was taking advantage of her. no matter how stupid that woman may be for going back to him, she still deosn't deserve that abuse. maybe if u'd been in that type of situation u'd understand how low someone's self esteem has to be to take that kind of crap from someone. i wouldn't wish that experience on someone i hated. |
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Re: Women
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by chatabox on
Monday, 9th September 2002 @ 01:12:03 AM AEST
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| well IMHO noone deserves to be treated badly, whether they be man or woman. You sound quite bitter, but not every relationship is the same. I hope you find what you are after. |
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Re: Women
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by papajfat on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 03:54:15 AM AEST
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| hey i think your on to something, all the comments before mine all seem to be pretty PO'ed and everybody knows that contraversy sells. |
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Re: Women
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by NotBagheadX on
Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 06:42:18 AM AEST
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| not intentionally meaning to be controversial. just speaking my mind |
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Re: Women
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by NotBagheadX on
Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 06:43:13 AM AEST
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| sorry. intentionally meant(excuse my poor grammar) |
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Re: Women
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by NotBagheadX on
Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 06:47:00 AM AEST
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| oops that last one was meant for f the comment below yours |
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Re: Women
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by ATTICUSKRAZEZ on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:03:48 AM AEST
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| Strong Words...I know what your getting at...You see the nice girls with the guys that cheat on them and take advantage...It really sucks...The more they hurt the more they love him...Its messed up... |
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Re: Women
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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| Im posting this comment anonymously because Ima tell you how I see it from both sides. No women deserves to be beat or hurt if she hasn't done anything to be hurt physically or emotionally. What I'm saying is don't walk up to a boy you know and start swinging and expect not to get atleast a shove, and don't cheat on your man and not expect for him not to talk to you. And for men, don't ever hit a woman, it is wrong for you to take out your frustrations on the one who loves you, don't hurt her just to hurt her just to see her cry, and never put a women in a type of situation were she is forced to love you, and that goes for females too, both scenarios. But nowadays a man would be lucky if he ever got away with hitting a girl, cause where I come from boys aren't the only ones that carry metal. |
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