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So This Is Love
Contributed by
sweet-poison
on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 05:54:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This pulsating nothingness,
This breathless moment,
That heartstopping silence,
That repetative numb.
I'm lost,
I appear here,
Thats just a shell of me,
I'm up here, drifting.
I'm floating,
Escaping your reality,
I left my body down there,
I'm up here, I'm free.
I'm cascading,
Through waves of tranquility,
I feel nothing now,
I'm up here, Drowning.
I'm falling,
Returning to your presence,
I feel nothing but you,
I'm here now, I'm returning.
I'm collapsing,
Emotionally, into you,
Your part of me again,
I'm here now, I'm yours.
This elevating amasement,
This accelerating astonishment,
That overwhelming elation,
That ever increasing love.
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sweet-poison
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2004-02-16 17:54:37]
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Re: So This Is Love
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by faithmairee on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:40:57 PM AEST
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this is probably the best poem i've seen posted here since i came on board...you have a wonderful writing style and you captured the very heart and soul of being in love in your own unique way...i thoroughly enjoyed reading this...what a great poem.
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Re: So This Is Love
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 05:33:09 PM AEST
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| To be honest yeah, you kinda lost me the first time I read it, but after I read it carefully over and over again, I start to understand it, and the more I understand it, the more I like this poem.... I am falling in love at the moment, (err, I think...lol) so I can really relate to what you say, bravo!^_^ |
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