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Hey (old man)
Contributed by
Remi
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Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 03:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hey(old man)
Feb 10, 04
7:34 pm
"whistling" ooooh ree how ya doing old man u gotta be tire by now that body of your ain't holdin up like it use to, it got be wearin heaver by now, those knees ain't as strong as they use to be
I mean u been doing this for what now 21 years u can't look me In the eye and said u not In a need for a long nap
How those knees again they got be killin u 21 years of hate u put toward me, tearing me down, pullin me down, makin me feel so small and dump and stupid don't forget ugly
Well u sore what u wheat
Go ahead close those eyes u shock to see me here I know u are, well u sit down In your chair and stay quite I know longer recongized your voice u can't touch me anymore
I be In the apple city bangin on my guiter makin sweet tunes and walkin down broadway, having fun at Time Square fallin In love with Carson at first sight hopin to bump into Vin Diesel hopin to share some creative writin secret between writers , hell maybe he can help me out from one writer to another
Hey old man I send u a post card
In 10 years I'm enjoying the great view of my life I'm makin a deal with the world
Hey old man
Hey old man rest your bones u gonna need it
Hey old man u need a hand
Hey old man pride can't help u
Hey old man
Hey old man
Hey old man
Hey
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Remi
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2004-02-16 15:36:49]
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Re: Hey (old man)
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:31:32 PM AEST
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