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Array ( [sid] => 35200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I should be him [time] => 2004-02-16 13:59:53 [hometext] => Haha, all my poems are about lost love. This one has alot of raw emotion put into it by the way. Please comment, constructive critcism is appreciated [bodytext] => The first time I really saw you.
Captivated
Mesmerized
Awestruck
I thought I had trouble then.
Now words barely escape.
The sickness has taken over, and you spread the germ.
Have I been blinded?
Because all I see is you.
You’re impossible to have.
I know what it takes.

I wish I knew what you see in him.
I can’t come to those terms.
Because I’m stuck watching all you do.

Trapped deep in the recesses of my mind are the words you’ve said.
Wishing they were the words you hadn’t.

Now all I can do is wait.
Hope.
Dream.
Wish.
I could care less how long it takes.
Because one day with you, is worth 1000 waiting.
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I should be him

Contributed by tecnorobo on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:59:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The first time I really saw you.
Captivated
Mesmerized
Awestruck
I thought I had trouble then.
Now words barely escape.
The sickness has taken over, and you spread the germ.
Have I been blinded?
Because all I see is you.
You’re impossible to have.
I know what it takes.

I wish I knew what you see in him.
I can’t come to those terms.
Because I’m stuck watching all you do.

Trapped deep in the recesses of my mind are the words you’ve said.
Wishing they were the words you hadn’t.

Now all I can do is wait.
Hope.
Dream.
Wish.
I could care less how long it takes.
Because one day with you, is worth 1000 waiting.

Copyright Â© tecnorobo ... [ 2004-02-16 13:59:53]
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Re: I should be him (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 04:00:20 PM AEST
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very well written. I can sympathize with you, the girl I like has had the same boyfriend for two years, so there isn't much chance of them breaking up. It really sucks.

Re: I should be him (User Rating: 1 )
by Joe on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:14:34 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel or felt, which ever.
And I hate these feelings. but thank you

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