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[aid] => mick
[title] => Inundation of Divine Bliss..
[time] => 2004-02-16 00:50:21
[hometext] => I wanted to write a very very beautiful poem, at last I did this in five stanzas at my best. Hope you will not miss it. please read and enjoy..
[bodytext] => When shall I see thee and gain bliss
Unattainable even by gods and angels
Holding with my hands thy holy feet
Pressing them against my head, chest
And eyes and smelling their fragrance
Resembling that of full blown lotuses!
* * *
Thou kingly bird of my mind, give up
Thy vain wanderings and quest of joys
Sport for ever in the nest of Siva’s feet
Which are resorted to by birds of sages
For tasting nectarine fruit of liberation!
* * *
O kingly swan of my mind, sport here
At pleasure with the ladies of devotion
Residing in the privacy of the mansion
Of Siva’s feet- a mansion of brilliance
With ruby like luster of those lotus feet
And resorted to by sages who meditate
On the meanings of the sacred mantras!
* * *
O kingly swan, why do you wander in
The muddy tanks of worldliness fit for
Mean creatures? Go unto the pure and
Perpetual lake of divine contemplation
Having eternal bliss for its water, minds
Of heavenly sages for its lotus flowers
The holy men as its birds resorting to it
Sins as the dirt it cleanses away, and
Virtuous disposition as the fragrance it
Emits, and then my swan drink its bliss!
* * *
O great Lord, who ever attains to a state
In which he joyfully surrenders his heart
To thee and spends his time in meditation
And ecstasy and in seeing thy holy images
In listening thy stories, in singing thy hymns
And in worship to thee- he attains liberation
In this very life, indeed, thus says a sage poet!
* * * * * * * Om Namah Sivaya * * * * * * *
88888888888888888888888888888888888888
16-2-2004
* Source: Sri Adi Sankara
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[counter] => 219
[topic] => 62
[informant] => venkat
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Inundation of Divine Bliss..
Contributed by
venkat
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Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:50:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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When shall I see thee and gain bliss
Unattainable even by gods and angels
Holding with my hands thy holy feet
Pressing them against my head, chest
And eyes and smelling their fragrance
Resembling that of full blown lotuses!
* * *
Thou kingly bird of my mind, give up
Thy vain wanderings and quest of joys
Sport for ever in the nest of Siva’s feet
Which are resorted to by birds of sages
For tasting nectarine fruit of liberation!
* * *
O kingly swan of my mind, sport here
At pleasure with the ladies of devotion
Residing in the privacy of the mansion
Of Siva’s feet- a mansion of brilliance
With ruby like luster of those lotus feet
And resorted to by sages who meditate
On the meanings of the sacred mantras!
* * *
O kingly swan, why do you wander in
The muddy tanks of worldliness fit for
Mean creatures? Go unto the pure and
Perpetual lake of divine contemplation
Having eternal bliss for its water, minds
Of heavenly sages for its lotus flowers
The holy men as its birds resorting to it
Sins as the dirt it cleanses away, and
Virtuous disposition as the fragrance it
Emits, and then my swan drink its bliss!
* * *
O great Lord, who ever attains to a state
In which he joyfully surrenders his heart
To thee and spends his time in meditation
And ecstasy and in seeing thy holy images
In listening thy stories, in singing thy hymns
And in worship to thee- he attains liberation
In this very life, indeed, thus says a sage poet!
* * * * * * * Om Namah Sivaya * * * * * * *
88888888888888888888888888888888888888
16-2-2004
* Source: Sri Adi Sankara
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:55:00 AM AEST
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Well I'd say you acomplished your goal.
This is heavenly beautifull!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by Lionel on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:11:05 AM AEST
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| Well.... It's differant..... lotus, thats nice. I like flowers.....and birds - I like birds......I guess it's all right. |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:22:13 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful write.. this is definately a work of art!! you are so very talented!! great job!!
Peace
JENNA |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:28:16 AM AEST
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| Beautiful! It shows you took great time on this work of art! Christina |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 05:32:42 AM AEST
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Gah, I love the exotic images you used here! So vibrant and full of life, this is what poetry was created for. You set out to create a beautiful poem, and you not only succeeded, but you did so in an amazing way.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 06:27:30 AM AEST
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Dear Venkat kind sir........
This poem was unusal as all of your poems.
Beautiful and divine.....Venkat
I can tell you spent alot of time!
Thank you for sharing with us,
Warm Poetic Love,
ConSue |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:23:05 PM AEST
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| hey! inundate is one of my favorite words, lol! anyways, a very beautiful write...always a pleasure to read your work =) |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 02:31:51 PM AEST
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another beautiful tapestry of words for the ages...
Shari |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 02:32:40 PM AEST
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Ahhhhh, your words are just what the doctor orderd! Divine contemplation, from a spiritually poetic man! Thanks!!!
Since no one else will vote on it....I surely will!!! Not that votes matter because this is simply divine perfection for the soul!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 01:11:17 AM AEST
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Words well woven!!!! Always a pleasure to read...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 02:29:33 AM AEST
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You presented your heartfelt beliefs in a well focused and easily understandable work of art. The visualizations here were serene and peaceful even though you were questioning. I thoroughly enjoyed this read and will continue to read your work.
Have a good day,
Rita |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 08:25:56 AM AEST
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| This one makes my soul fly to that blissful lake of manasa...salutes.K |
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Re: Inundation of Divine Bliss..
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by bhavnas on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:50:34 AM AEST
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overwhelmingly beautiful...."Perpetual lake of divine contemplation", beautiful symbolism....Thou kingly bird of my mind, give up
Thy vain wanderings and quest of joys
..oh i love this...smiles.....bhavna
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